for My Sweet Dream8/7/2009 c1 
21excentricreativity
I was very relateable to this poem. Or at least in my understanding I was. I liked it for that.
"I want to go back where I feel I belong" I really liked this line. It makes me want to say "don't we all"
-EC from the review marathon (Link in my profile)
21excentricreativityI was very relateable to this poem. Or at least in my understanding I was. I liked it for that.
"I want to go back where I feel I belong" I really liked this line. It makes me want to say "don't we all"
-EC from the review marathon (Link in my profile)
8/7/2009 c1 56Luna Turner
I think I like short poems like this the best because if you're a good writer, you can convey a lot of meaning through the words without boring the reader.
And you have absolutely no problem doing this. This is an incredible piece and you did an excellent job writing it.
I can really imagine everything you're saying.
Yours truly,
Luna Turner
56Luna TurnerI think I like short poems like this the best because if you're a good writer, you can convey a lot of meaning through the words without boring the reader.
And you have absolutely no problem doing this. This is an incredible piece and you did an excellent job writing it.
I can really imagine everything you're saying.
Yours truly,
Luna Turner