for Necrotizing Fasciitis1/9/2011 c1 Nariki
O.O...this was, er, very good. Kinda on the emo, "life should go kill itself" kind of thought process, but a, uh, very good, um, story? I think i prefer reading about logan and declan to something depressing... Dont get me wrong-i love depressing angsty stuff, but this is seriously...COOL! Loved it, like everything else you write.
O.O...this was, er, very good. Kinda on the emo, "life should go kill itself" kind of thought process, but a, uh, very good, um, story? I think i prefer reading about logan and declan to something depressing... Dont get me wrong-i love depressing angsty stuff, but this is seriously...COOL! Loved it, like everything else you write.
1/3/2010 c1 
6letyoursoultakeflight
Okay, you are seriously talented! You write so naturally and everything you write cannot help but draw some kind of emotion from the reader. Love it!
6letyoursoultakeflightOkay, you are seriously talented! You write so naturally and everything you write cannot help but draw some kind of emotion from the reader. Love it!
8/9/2009 c1 4hurts
Very good, you're a great wordsmith :]
Trust is a very important thing, yes it is. Why let others control you? That's a point, too.
This resembles Logan from Won't Cry For You a lot, though.
4hurtsVery good, you're a great wordsmith :]
Trust is a very important thing, yes it is. Why let others control you? That's a point, too.
This resembles Logan from Won't Cry For You a lot, though.
8/7/2009 c1 JustCyde
Wow talk about dark D: It was good though and definatley made me think about trusting people and how they DO eventually let you down.
Wow talk about dark D: It was good though and definatley made me think about trusting people and how they DO eventually let you down.
8/7/2009 c1 fantasylover1204873632
Great words and visuals! It's beautifully written, though I hope you don't believe it's true. After all, isn't it better to be a living slave than terminal by your own hand? You can still have relationships and be independent, rather than letting yourself eat your ownself away. Again, keep up with the nice wordplay though.
Great words and visuals! It's beautifully written, though I hope you don't believe it's true. After all, isn't it better to be a living slave than terminal by your own hand? You can still have relationships and be independent, rather than letting yourself eat your ownself away. Again, keep up with the nice wordplay though.