for This One Last Chance4/4/2012 c1 
2Hecate's Diamon
Ahahahah! I actually laughed out loud when I read his sad attempt at the Santa Clause line! Too funny! I really enjoyed this one as a one shot. Danny is just so ridiculous I don't know if I'd like him in a full length story, but as a one shot he was perfect. So damn funny! And jello shots are delicious!
2Hecate's DiamonAhahahah! I actually laughed out loud when I read his sad attempt at the Santa Clause line! Too funny! I really enjoyed this one as a one shot. Danny is just so ridiculous I don't know if I'd like him in a full length story, but as a one shot he was perfect. So damn funny! And jello shots are delicious!
7/15/2011 c1 8JamieBell
I must say that I cracked up profusely reading how he botched that pick-up line. Definitely rough, but a cute concept. Those triplets made me laugh. I'd like to know more about them! :)
8JamieBellI must say that I cracked up profusely reading how he botched that pick-up line. Definitely rough, but a cute concept. Those triplets made me laugh. I'd like to know more about them! :)
4/9/2011 c1 13youngin-matomon
weirdest set of stuff i've ever seen.
favourite part: " 'Hey,' She drew my head away for a moment and looked at me, 'Was that seriously a real priest you brought along?'
'What, you think I'd bring you a fake priest?' I asked, a little bit offended at her doubt.
She laughed and shook her head, 'Frankly, Danny, some days I don't know what you'd do.' "
13youngin-matomonweirdest set of stuff i've ever seen.
favourite part: " 'Hey,' She drew my head away for a moment and looked at me, 'Was that seriously a real priest you brought along?'
'What, you think I'd bring you a fake priest?' I asked, a little bit offended at her doubt.
She laughed and shook her head, 'Frankly, Danny, some days I don't know what you'd do.' "
1/13/2011 c1 9Spontaneous Juju
Ohmigod. Just want to say, I just read your "Private Lives Public Property" and my mind was sort of entirely blown. And then I read this, and I'm actually supposed to be *ah-hem* studying for Chemistry, so when I started laughing hysterically, I think my sister thought I finally lost my last remaining marble. But when Danny pulled out his "real priest," and you described how much the presentation of this man threw Susie off, I cracked up. Please, KEEP WRITING! :D You're amazing!
9Spontaneous JujuOhmigod. Just want to say, I just read your "Private Lives Public Property" and my mind was sort of entirely blown. And then I read this, and I'm actually supposed to be *ah-hem* studying for Chemistry, so when I started laughing hysterically, I think my sister thought I finally lost my last remaining marble. But when Danny pulled out his "real priest," and you described how much the presentation of this man threw Susie off, I cracked up. Please, KEEP WRITING! :D You're amazing!
11/29/2010 c1 kaw97
I think it was wonderful! I rarely laugh out loud at stories, but when he's telling the priest what he actually said to her as the pickup line, I did! It was funny, sweet and although you say you wrote it in an hour, I thought it flowed well and came to a natural conclusion. I don't know why you would think anything was wrong with it.
I have enjoyed all your writing - especially SMTL and PLPP. Very different from each other and both great stories with nice depth in the characters. I've read each one more than once.
I also like that you write about Australian characters in Australia and I have learned a lot about slang, customs etc. from your writing. I have several American friends living in and around Melbourne, so it helps me relate to some of the things they tell me. Especially the differences in seasons.
Keep writing! You are one of my favorite authors on fp and my list is pretty short.
I think it was wonderful! I rarely laugh out loud at stories, but when he's telling the priest what he actually said to her as the pickup line, I did! It was funny, sweet and although you say you wrote it in an hour, I thought it flowed well and came to a natural conclusion. I don't know why you would think anything was wrong with it.
I have enjoyed all your writing - especially SMTL and PLPP. Very different from each other and both great stories with nice depth in the characters. I've read each one more than once.
I also like that you write about Australian characters in Australia and I have learned a lot about slang, customs etc. from your writing. I have several American friends living in and around Melbourne, so it helps me relate to some of the things they tell me. Especially the differences in seasons.
Keep writing! You are one of my favorite authors on fp and my list is pretty short.
11/16/2010 c1 ess3sandra
I read your other two oneshots, but i already reviewed them. and then i read this, and i must have missed to review it last time. but not now =)
ao do tell, what will your next story be? you done the srcastic girl brothers best friend, the shy girl and the star, the rebell and the good girl, the hate love relationship.
maybe the best friend one? or the boss. or the were hooking up and we both like eachother but the other one doenst.
I read your other two oneshots, but i already reviewed them. and then i read this, and i must have missed to review it last time. but not now =)
ao do tell, what will your next story be? you done the srcastic girl brothers best friend, the shy girl and the star, the rebell and the good girl, the hate love relationship.
maybe the best friend one? or the boss. or the were hooking up and we both like eachother but the other one doenst.
10/27/2010 c1 Anara Celebvilya
That was definitely fun to read. Danny seemed very... goofy is the best word I can think of. And scatter-brained (is that supposed to be hyphenated?). That was funny though. I liked the priest.
That was definitely fun to read. Danny seemed very... goofy is the best word I can think of. And scatter-brained (is that supposed to be hyphenated?). That was funny though. I liked the priest.