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8/10/2009 c1 14its.Nothing.Special
No, YOU are a legend. Hilarious and heartwarming and LOL, Cerberus! Loved the way Danny described Susie (and her hair) to the priest. Crazy awesome.

8/10/2009 c1 24Sorrow's Smile
awesome. I laughed my head off.
8/10/2009 c1 1Naoise
PEAS! From personal experience? LOL

This was very funny Jess. I laughed out loud!

- Naoise
8/10/2009 c1 2simplicity is complex
OMGOOSE I was reading this and it made me so happy happy happy even though I was so depressed about stuff. Gosh you make me uber happy. Danny is so cute goodness! "you think I'd bring you a fake priest?" Of all things to say. HAHAHA. I totally imagined the pout and the disbelief. Hahaha thanks for this lovely oneshot that just made my day(night) so much brighter
8/10/2009 c1 22whacked
OMG THIS IS TRES ADORABLE! i kinda wanna show it to my bf and tell him SEE this is how you make up when we fight! this was really so cute. I always keep looking forward to your stories! i hope there will be more to come. I loved the guy, his offbeat ways. so very adorable and my favourite line:

"“Why, what’ve you done?” I demanded, suspicious that my newfound genuine priest was, in fact, a baddie." I laughed so much at that! Please keep writing!
8/9/2009 c1 9Spinning Yarns
I started laughing at the beginning and I don't think I stopped once. Yeah, it was a little rough around the edges, but one hour? Not bad! But what I liked most about it was that it was a good pick-you-up kind of story. Just a fun quickie to read when you're feeling down to make you happy again, or something to just make you even more cheerful! Congrats on a cute one shot. (:

8/9/2009 c1 Gethsemanee
Even though you did this story in an hour,

it was still a good story :)

Nice and light hearted.

Nice job!
8/9/2009 c1 chng234
it is so sweet n funny at the same time. a well written work
8/9/2009 c1 5kissmesober
Win, win, win. Danny was the cutest character ever, and I totally hold firm in the way that you show parts of yourself in your characters, but he seemed rather similar to Isobel haha.

The story was short, but heart-felt, and I loved the way Danny talked to the priest, and also to his boss, that was amusing.

Hope it helped with your writers block!
8/9/2009 c1 jessicaxoxo
This is really awesome! (:

I seriously died laughing.

I love reading random one-shots like this, so thanks for making my day!

8/9/2009 c1 Erin
Aw :). That was adorable! I'm glad you're back writing :D.
8/9/2009 c1 IlikePineapples
I absolutely love it!

It was really funny too :).

Keep up the good work !
8/9/2009 c1 natmarie
Definately fun to read. The dialogue was great and you seemed to meet the challege well. :)
8/9/2009 c1 5annoyance
This story was so crazy and fun! I loved it :)
8/9/2009 c1 1Lil Bazza
There were some lines that were absolute gold. That pick up line (the one he said) is something I can so imagine happening in a pub. I laughed so hard.

It was a great story for an hour. And for writers block. I really enjoyed it, and it was a great appetiser for your next story! :D

The only part I didn't like was evil triplets. I've always wanted to be a triplet, and having evil triplets ruins the romantic notions I have about triplets.

Anyway, keep going. I can't wait for whatever is coming... because if your practice is any indication... :D

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