for This One Last Chance8/10/2009 c1 
14its.Nothing.Special
No, YOU are a legend. Hilarious and heartwarming and LOL, Cerberus! Loved the way Danny described Susie (and her hair) to the priest. Crazy awesome.
;)becky
14its.Nothing.SpecialNo, YOU are a legend. Hilarious and heartwarming and LOL, Cerberus! Loved the way Danny described Susie (and her hair) to the priest. Crazy awesome.
;)becky
8/10/2009 c1 1Naoise
PEAS! From personal experience? LOL
This was very funny Jess. I laughed out loud!
- Naoise
1NaoisePEAS! From personal experience? LOL
This was very funny Jess. I laughed out loud!
- Naoise
8/10/2009 c1 2simplicity is complex
OMGOOSE I was reading this and it made me so happy happy happy even though I was so depressed about stuff. Gosh you make me uber happy. Danny is so cute goodness! "you think I'd bring you a fake priest?" Of all things to say. HAHAHA. I totally imagined the pout and the disbelief. Hahaha thanks for this lovely oneshot that just made my day(night) so much brighter
2simplicity is complexOMGOOSE I was reading this and it made me so happy happy happy even though I was so depressed about stuff. Gosh you make me uber happy. Danny is so cute goodness! "you think I'd bring you a fake priest?" Of all things to say. HAHAHA. I totally imagined the pout and the disbelief. Hahaha thanks for this lovely oneshot that just made my day(night) so much brighter
8/10/2009 c1 22whacked
OMG THIS IS TRES ADORABLE! i kinda wanna show it to my bf and tell him SEE this is how you make up when we fight! this was really so cute. I always keep looking forward to your stories! i hope there will be more to come. I loved the guy, his offbeat ways. so very adorable and my favourite line:
"“Why, what’ve you done?” I demanded, suspicious that my newfound genuine priest was, in fact, a baddie." I laughed so much at that! Please keep writing!
22whackedOMG THIS IS TRES ADORABLE! i kinda wanna show it to my bf and tell him SEE this is how you make up when we fight! this was really so cute. I always keep looking forward to your stories! i hope there will be more to come. I loved the guy, his offbeat ways. so very adorable and my favourite line:
"“Why, what’ve you done?” I demanded, suspicious that my newfound genuine priest was, in fact, a baddie." I laughed so much at that! Please keep writing!
8/9/2009 c1 9Spinning Yarns
I started laughing at the beginning and I don't think I stopped once. Yeah, it was a little rough around the edges, but one hour? Not bad! But what I liked most about it was that it was a good pick-you-up kind of story. Just a fun quickie to read when you're feeling down to make you happy again, or something to just make you even more cheerful! Congrats on a cute one shot. (:
-Sabrina
9Spinning YarnsI started laughing at the beginning and I don't think I stopped once. Yeah, it was a little rough around the edges, but one hour? Not bad! But what I liked most about it was that it was a good pick-you-up kind of story. Just a fun quickie to read when you're feeling down to make you happy again, or something to just make you even more cheerful! Congrats on a cute one shot. (:
-Sabrina
8/9/2009 c1 Gethsemanee
Even though you did this story in an hour,
it was still a good story :)
Nice and light hearted.
Nice job!
Even though you did this story in an hour,
it was still a good story :)
Nice and light hearted.
Nice job!
8/9/2009 c1 5kissmesober
Win, win, win. Danny was the cutest character ever, and I totally hold firm in the way that you show parts of yourself in your characters, but he seemed rather similar to Isobel haha.
The story was short, but heart-felt, and I loved the way Danny talked to the priest, and also to his boss, that was amusing.
Hope it helped with your writers block!
5kissmesoberWin, win, win. Danny was the cutest character ever, and I totally hold firm in the way that you show parts of yourself in your characters, but he seemed rather similar to Isobel haha.
The story was short, but heart-felt, and I loved the way Danny talked to the priest, and also to his boss, that was amusing.
Hope it helped with your writers block!
8/9/2009 c1 jessicaxoxo
This is really awesome! (:
I seriously died laughing.
I love reading random one-shots like this, so thanks for making my day!
;D
This is really awesome! (:
I seriously died laughing.
I love reading random one-shots like this, so thanks for making my day!
;D
8/9/2009 c1 Erin
Aw :). That was adorable! I'm glad you're back writing :D.
Aw :). That was adorable! I'm glad you're back writing :D.
8/9/2009 c1 IlikePineapples
I absolutely love it!
It was really funny too :).
Keep up the good work !
I absolutely love it!
It was really funny too :).
Keep up the good work !
8/9/2009 c1 natmarie
Definately fun to read. The dialogue was great and you seemed to meet the challege well. :)
Definately fun to read. The dialogue was great and you seemed to meet the challege well. :)
8/9/2009 c1 1Lil Bazza
There were some lines that were absolute gold. That pick up line (the one he said) is something I can so imagine happening in a pub. I laughed so hard.
It was a great story for an hour. And for writers block. I really enjoyed it, and it was a great appetiser for your next story! :D
The only part I didn't like was evil triplets. I've always wanted to be a triplet, and having evil triplets ruins the romantic notions I have about triplets.
Anyway, keep going. I can't wait for whatever is coming... because if your practice is any indication... :D
Jen.
1Lil BazzaThere were some lines that were absolute gold. That pick up line (the one he said) is something I can so imagine happening in a pub. I laughed so hard.
It was a great story for an hour. And for writers block. I really enjoyed it, and it was a great appetiser for your next story! :D
The only part I didn't like was evil triplets. I've always wanted to be a triplet, and having evil triplets ruins the romantic notions I have about triplets.
Anyway, keep going. I can't wait for whatever is coming... because if your practice is any indication... :D
Jen.