for This One Last Chance8/9/2009 c1 
3Sav3MyS0ul
lol, it was really hilarious. I was laughing so loudly at Danny's confession to the priest.
You have done really great job in one hour and tackled the challange head on.
Great one shot. It made me laugh and it was beautiful :)
3Sav3MyS0ullol, it was really hilarious. I was laughing so loudly at Danny's confession to the priest.
You have done really great job in one hour and tackled the challange head on.
Great one shot. It made me laugh and it was beautiful :)
8/9/2009 c1 16Enigmatic Night
"you still have your job; the love of your life not so much." I love 'not so much' lines.
Oh, and the pickup line (esp the mess up of it) was hilarious.
Crack up line of the piece.
Oh, and this was a total 'story within a story' plot line, awesomeness.
16Enigmatic Night"you still have your job; the love of your life not so much." I love 'not so much' lines.
Oh, and the pickup line (esp the mess up of it) was hilarious.
Crack up line of the piece.
Oh, and this was a total 'story within a story' plot line, awesomeness.