
8/9/2009 c1 EverEverAfter
A beautiful story. The card made me melt. 'The most romantic place is where you are'..Well thought out and very well written. I would try and not elongate some of the dialogues so much, but it was otherwise fantastic :)
A beautiful story. The card made me melt. 'The most romantic place is where you are'..Well thought out and very well written. I would try and not elongate some of the dialogues so much, but it was otherwise fantastic :)
8/9/2009 c1 nnn123
This story is one of those perfect 'boy likes girl and girl likes him back' stories. Very well written. Good job!
This story is one of those perfect 'boy likes girl and girl likes him back' stories. Very well written. Good job!