
7/6/2012 c1 Guest
Wooow, that was so incredibly cute! (x
Wooow, that was so incredibly cute! (x
7/1/2012 c1 Guest
Sweet story! Love it!
Sweet story! Love it!
2/23/2012 c1
8theKnobblyKneedWriter
I'M GOING TO CRY WITH HAPPINESS, WHY IS VALENTINES DAY OVER. :'( That was beautiful.

I'M GOING TO CRY WITH HAPPINESS, WHY IS VALENTINES DAY OVER. :'( That was beautiful.
12/26/2011 c1 A Midsummer Night's Dream
Predictable but you managed to make it cute and not be the mushy fluffiness others seems to ooze off.Not that I have something against anything fluffy, I like marshmallows myself, but sometimes I can't help but bang my head when its overdone.
Predictable but you managed to make it cute and not be the mushy fluffiness others seems to ooze off.Not that I have something against anything fluffy, I like marshmallows myself, but sometimes I can't help but bang my head when its overdone.
12/3/2011 c1
10Ardina Falconhurst
Awe! That's an adorable story! :) I loved it! Just wish right at the end she would have looked over and seen him smiling before he disappeared into his next class. :)
Great job here! Keep up the good work!

Awe! That's an adorable story! :) I loved it! Just wish right at the end she would have looked over and seen him smiling before he disappeared into his next class. :)
Great job here! Keep up the good work!
11/23/2011 c1
1leavesfallingup
A truly beautiful story. You should honestly write this out in a longer format and send it to Hallmark. They could definitely turn this into either a commercial or a special... not that you necessarily want to commercialize your work, but it is a story worth developing and showing.

A truly beautiful story. You should honestly write this out in a longer format and send it to Hallmark. They could definitely turn this into either a commercial or a special... not that you necessarily want to commercialize your work, but it is a story worth developing and showing.
10/19/2011 c1 Willow
Aaawwww...so cute. *wishes something like that would happen to me* Thanks!
Aaawwww...so cute. *wishes something like that would happen to me* Thanks!
8/10/2011 c1 M
Why is this not how life works? *sigh*
Why is this not how life works? *sigh*
6/10/2011 c1 buznuz1
loove love loved it! it was cute without being cheesy, funny without being stupid and so so so sweet!
loove love loved it! it was cute without being cheesy, funny without being stupid and so so so sweet!
5/14/2011 c1 mad4life
awwwws. this was soo cute!
awwwws. this was soo cute!