for Say It With A Card5/5/2011 c1 Brown-Eyed Chocoholic
This made me giggle at the end!
Fun to read. :) The ending made my heart go all warm and fuzzy. Dang, I wish someone would send me a card like that.
This made me giggle at the end!
Fun to read. :) The ending made my heart go all warm and fuzzy. Dang, I wish someone would send me a card like that.
5/5/2011 c1 elle
Awh, that was sweet! nicely done :)
Awh, that was sweet! nicely done :)
5/1/2011 c1 chocolate and bananas
I love the phrase "who makes her workplace romantic just by being there." It was so beautiful, and that seems so heartfelt to be in that card. Haha! I think it was a bit too obvious that she would get the card from the beginning, though, so maybe polishing up a bit more to add more depth to the heartache of Taylor would be better. Something more concrete. Keep writing!
I love the phrase "who makes her workplace romantic just by being there." It was so beautiful, and that seems so heartfelt to be in that card. Haha! I think it was a bit too obvious that she would get the card from the beginning, though, so maybe polishing up a bit more to add more depth to the heartache of Taylor would be better. Something more concrete. Keep writing!
4/1/2011 c1 
2elma
That was really good! The perfect way to give a valentines day card! :) Besides the cliche of the talking about the person you like TO the person you like- which I suppose I'm prejudiced against because its happened too many times- I really really enjoyed it. His inscription was just right too :D
2elmaThat was really good! The perfect way to give a valentines day card! :) Besides the cliche of the talking about the person you like TO the person you like- which I suppose I'm prejudiced against because its happened too many times- I really really enjoyed it. His inscription was just right too :D
3/23/2011 c1 3charmedblush
aw! I want to see how it ends! I know its a one shot, but I'm a cover-every-aspect-of-the-end-and-then...dun-dun-dun...write-a-sequel!-kinda girl. However i really liked this and thought it was super sweet
3charmedblushaw! I want to see how it ends! I know its a one shot, but I'm a cover-every-aspect-of-the-end-and-then...dun-dun-dun...write-a-sequel!-kinda girl. However i really liked this and thought it was super sweet
1/10/2011 c1 M
I just read this, again. It's just so romantic and cute and ugh.I'm just wondering what'll happen next; does she push her way through the crowd and leap into his arms or something else that's just as cliche and hopelessly romantic?
I just read this, again. It's just so romantic and cute and ugh.I'm just wondering what'll happen next; does she push her way through the crowd and leap into his arms or something else that's just as cliche and hopelessly romantic?
1/3/2011 c1 1ScreamingInfidelities
i really enjoyed reading this. i think it was a good short story unlike others that try to cram too much into a limit of words. any ways... i'll be reading some of your other stuff :)
1ScreamingInfidelitiesi really enjoyed reading this. i think it was a good short story unlike others that try to cram too much into a limit of words. any ways... i'll be reading some of your other stuff :)
12/28/2010 c1 MakeItHappen01
Ah I really am a hopeless romantic, aren't I? This story made me smile like no tomorrow and gave me this really nice feeling in my stomach. Yes I know, CORNY! And I know saying that is corny but it's true. This story is sweet and cute and adorable and just absolutely beautiful.
Ah I really am a hopeless romantic, aren't I? This story made me smile like no tomorrow and gave me this really nice feeling in my stomach. Yes I know, CORNY! And I know saying that is corny but it's true. This story is sweet and cute and adorable and just absolutely beautiful.
12/27/2010 c1 2pendragone96
This story gave me the warmest fuzzy feeling ever! I know that sounds corny but awe! I'm gonna add this to my favorites
2pendragone96This story gave me the warmest fuzzy feeling ever! I know that sounds corny but awe! I'm gonna add this to my favorites