for Invisible Chains9/16/2009 c4 gert
Love your story, I am hooked.
Can't wait for your next update,
when the little guy lets you. :)
Love your story, I am hooked.
Can't wait for your next update,
when the little guy lets you. :)
9/12/2009 c4 blackrule
hmm now to question what will happen next. It seems a bit strange though for something that happened so long ago to be brought to present unless he killed someone else. Anyway I have other things I wanted to say but last minute studying is drawing me away. I am going to be taking the ACT in about three hours now, but still havn't studied much of the math section... Anyway thanks for the reply to my review and the update. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
hmm now to question what will happen next. It seems a bit strange though for something that happened so long ago to be brought to present unless he killed someone else. Anyway I have other things I wanted to say but last minute studying is drawing me away. I am going to be taking the ACT in about three hours now, but still havn't studied much of the math section... Anyway thanks for the reply to my review and the update. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
9/11/2009 c4 gigichan
This is a good story. I don't know about title... but I can't wait for more!
This is a good story. I don't know about title... but I can't wait for more!
9/6/2009 c3 blackrule
oh interesting. I can't wait to read chapter four hehehe Might want to run through this chapter though, there were a couple of words that were misspelled the most noticeable being peasant rather than pleasant. heheh It's rather amusing to wish someone a peasant day hehe ;)
oh interesting. I can't wait to read chapter four hehehe Might want to run through this chapter though, there were a couple of words that were misspelled the most noticeable being peasant rather than pleasant. heheh It's rather amusing to wish someone a peasant day hehe ;)
8/20/2009 c1 Sheri
so descriptive, i hope ya write more soon :-) i really like your main characters wry humor... the naming on her weapons def made me giggle. and i like how almost old world your vamp actually sounds when he speaks and is described... makes it really seem as tho he is actually from a different time. i think the only thing i could critique is the choice on his clothes in the scene where they meet the first time.. its sexy... but i kinda thought of eighties and hair bands lol... but if thats what your going for then ya nailed it lol. other than that it really kept my interest while i was reading and i hope you find the time to add more... tho i know how hard it can be to get into a writers frame of mind with a two year old running around lol.. let me know when ya write more ok? ;-)
so descriptive, i hope ya write more soon :-) i really like your main characters wry humor... the naming on her weapons def made me giggle. and i like how almost old world your vamp actually sounds when he speaks and is described... makes it really seem as tho he is actually from a different time. i think the only thing i could critique is the choice on his clothes in the scene where they meet the first time.. its sexy... but i kinda thought of eighties and hair bands lol... but if thats what your going for then ya nailed it lol. other than that it really kept my interest while i was reading and i hope you find the time to add more... tho i know how hard it can be to get into a writers frame of mind with a two year old running around lol.. let me know when ya write more ok? ;-)
8/9/2009 c1 Sissy
I can't wait to read more. I love how descriptive you are, but it is still so real... make time to write!
I can't wait to read more. I love how descriptive you are, but it is still so real... make time to write!