for Burn5/3/2012 c1 
9a-perpetual-hiraeth
Dark and sad, but beautiful at the same time. I especially love the ending. You have a way with words, you.
9a-perpetual-hiraethDark and sad, but beautiful at the same time. I especially love the ending. You have a way with words, you.
8/12/2009 c1 29They Call Me Mimii
this is great, I can really relate. I actually have a few poems yet to be typed that kind of have a similar feeling, a lot of them are about losing a persons spark :) this is awesome!
29They Call Me Mimiithis is great, I can really relate. I actually have a few poems yet to be typed that kind of have a similar feeling, a lot of them are about losing a persons spark :) this is awesome!
8/11/2009 c1 fleur de l'est
Cynical and cruel, almost mocking. Reinforced by the short length of the poem. Nicely done!
~fleur
Cynical and cruel, almost mocking. Reinforced by the short length of the poem. Nicely done!
~fleur
8/10/2009 c1 163sharks don't sleep
I love "milky white eyes" followed by "now devoid of/anything at all" because milk is so mundane anyway so it just brings it to life.
Nice one.
C
163sharks don't sleepI love "milky white eyes" followed by "now devoid of/anything at all" because milk is so mundane anyway so it just brings it to life.
Nice one.
C