for Just Drive the Car11/13/2010 c4 DevilishMisfit
Thanks for this amazing piece of literature. This is the best fictional story about the mafia that I have ever read.
Thanks for this amazing piece of literature. This is the best fictional story about the mafia that I have ever read.
10/24/2010 c4 
2Iuno
Beautiful. I love how Little Nicky didn't turn out to be a stereotype emo kid with his fashion sense. I love their dads too! From the way they understood their sons and the complications of being in the business mixed with gay children.
2IunoBeautiful. I love how Little Nicky didn't turn out to be a stereotype emo kid with his fashion sense. I love their dads too! From the way they understood their sons and the complications of being in the business mixed with gay children.
8/15/2010 c4 ami-mochi1
love the dialogue in this! It's so natural. I wish this was longer, this definitely feels like it could be an entire verse.
love the dialogue in this! It's so natural. I wish this was longer, this definitely feels like it could be an entire verse.
6/12/2010 c4 rachel
no where's the rest? need more like a crack addict T_T
no where's the rest? need more like a crack addict T_T
5/24/2010 c1 eiyuang999
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4/19/2010 c4 6MantraMagazine
That was a really awesome story. To quote some book I read; "It's nice to see that thing called friendship between two gangsters." 'Cept this is better of course. When it really hit me you were writing about the mafia, I didn't think you could pull it off, but you did. Thanks for posting. I won't put you on alerts, but hopefully favorites is all right. :D
6MantraMagazineThat was a really awesome story. To quote some book I read; "It's nice to see that thing called friendship between two gangsters." 'Cept this is better of course. When it really hit me you were writing about the mafia, I didn't think you could pull it off, but you did. Thanks for posting. I won't put you on alerts, but hopefully favorites is all right. :D
3/13/2010 c1 12PapaMike
Yes the gangster fic! It's official, you rock the socks.
I especially liked how not cutsey this fic was. I'm so bored sifting through pages of "omgz! My name is Takashi(or some other suitably generic azn name). I love you, but do you love me? oh thats good cos now we can live happily forevar and have lots of buttsex" Gems like this make it worth it.
12PapaMikeYes the gangster fic! It's official, you rock the socks.
I especially liked how not cutsey this fic was. I'm so bored sifting through pages of "omgz! My name is Takashi(or some other suitably generic azn name). I love you, but do you love me? oh thats good cos now we can live happily forevar and have lots of buttsex" Gems like this make it worth it.
2/26/2010 c4 whitecrow
This is so good! And written so well, told in your inimitable style. You're really good, you know that? Blew any constructive feedback/crit right out of my mind. Just perfect. Thank you!
This is so good! And written so well, told in your inimitable style. You're really good, you know that? Blew any constructive feedback/crit right out of my mind. Just perfect. Thank you!
2/3/2010 c4 4Mewenn
That's excellent. It's also a short story that deserve another story showing Nicky and his "right hand man who got his back" (literally and graphically if possible) climb their way to the top.
4MewennThat's excellent. It's also a short story that deserve another story showing Nicky and his "right hand man who got his back" (literally and graphically if possible) climb their way to the top.
2/3/2010 c1 Mewenn
I usually avoid T- rated stories but in this particular case I don't even care if the car has more chances to get laid than any of the actual characters. Your style is just plain brilliant.
I usually avoid T- rated stories but in this particular case I don't even care if the car has more chances to get laid than any of the actual characters. Your style is just plain brilliant.
10/20/2009 c4 lotrdeana17
I really enjoyed this short story. It had a lot of warmth to it. The different scenarios you write about are so different with an astounding clarity. You really create each world you write about, and I love that. It's always a pleasure to read your work.
I really enjoyed this short story. It had a lot of warmth to it. The different scenarios you write about are so different with an astounding clarity. You really create each world you write about, and I love that. It's always a pleasure to read your work.
10/18/2009 c4 17mousegirl05
Once again, I have noting of deep construct to offer. This just means that you've knocked me off my typical grammar-style-word choice-and-theme-picky-soapbox. The pacing is great and the plot is excellent. I can tell why so many people want you to continue this. *laughs* It's excellent. It takes some authors hundreds of pages to build up characters they way you've done in such a short span. As I mentioned in it's comment, I read the spin-off first. I must say I liked both POVs. They're both great. Joey is excellent. Nicky is fabulous. Yep. That's all. Cheers!
17mousegirl05Once again, I have noting of deep construct to offer. This just means that you've knocked me off my typical grammar-style-word choice-and-theme-picky-soapbox. The pacing is great and the plot is excellent. I can tell why so many people want you to continue this. *laughs* It's excellent. It takes some authors hundreds of pages to build up characters they way you've done in such a short span. As I mentioned in it's comment, I read the spin-off first. I must say I liked both POVs. They're both great. Joey is excellent. Nicky is fabulous. Yep. That's all. Cheers!
10/6/2009 c4 Rhod
Naw
Naw