for His Saving Grace8/7/2011 c6 j
i admit i'm one of those terrible readers who read and never leave a review out of pure laziness. but i thought about it, seems abit unfair that i derive hours of pleasure from reading your story and not say a word of thanks. so thank you so much for sharing your writing and talent. many good fp writers have buggered off for lj because of the fear of being copied but you haven't and i admire you for that because you allow easy access for us to enjoy the stories you write, which i am sure many people are grateful and appreciative of (like me) who never really come out and say this. i like how you master the technique of 'showing and not telling' in your stories that many writers struggle with. i like your characters because they are real and perfect (even though people always say they can't be too perfect, but they are pretty darn heroic :)). i like the charisma and conversations between them because they can make me laugh out loud at the inanimate computer, great sense of humour there! sometimes when i'm bored, i re-read your stories because there are quite a few things i miss when i read the first time and for that i really commend you! lastly, please do finish this story (even though i know that inspiration cannot be forced)!
i admit i'm one of those terrible readers who read and never leave a review out of pure laziness. but i thought about it, seems abit unfair that i derive hours of pleasure from reading your story and not say a word of thanks. so thank you so much for sharing your writing and talent. many good fp writers have buggered off for lj because of the fear of being copied but you haven't and i admire you for that because you allow easy access for us to enjoy the stories you write, which i am sure many people are grateful and appreciative of (like me) who never really come out and say this. i like how you master the technique of 'showing and not telling' in your stories that many writers struggle with. i like your characters because they are real and perfect (even though people always say they can't be too perfect, but they are pretty darn heroic :)). i like the charisma and conversations between them because they can make me laugh out loud at the inanimate computer, great sense of humour there! sometimes when i'm bored, i re-read your stories because there are quite a few things i miss when i read the first time and for that i really commend you! lastly, please do finish this story (even though i know that inspiration cannot be forced)!
7/27/2011 c6 
1GittaStar
I have read soooo many of your stories abnd ypou are amaixng. Sorry if this is hard toread. I am up very late writng this
1GittaStarI have read soooo many of your stories abnd ypou are amaixng. Sorry if this is hard toread. I am up very late writng this
7/26/2011 c6 ZoeLovesLouis
Just let them have sex on the table in the grove already! lmfao (': I love this story btw. Will you continue to write it?
Just let them have sex on the table in the grove already! lmfao (': I love this story btw. Will you continue to write it?
6/11/2011 c6 witz13
Jess please Jess... Don't stop writing! This is getting delicious good! Whatever you do, don't stop writing! Love your stories, finish the saving from monkeys thing, cause that's epic and 'wow', but continue with this one too please!
Jess please Jess... Don't stop writing! This is getting delicious good! Whatever you do, don't stop writing! Love your stories, finish the saving from monkeys thing, cause that's epic and 'wow', but continue with this one too please!
5/29/2011 c6 2fairydustillusion
thanks. just thanks. you know, it's considered pretty cruel to get someone hooked on a story and then not update? hahaha just kidding :P I was expecting for this sequel to not be as good as SMtL, but it's definitely shaping up! it's so addicting. even though it's nearly been two years, can you PLEEEEEASE update?
-fairydustillusion
2fairydustillusionthanks. just thanks. you know, it's considered pretty cruel to get someone hooked on a story and then not update? hahaha just kidding :P I was expecting for this sequel to not be as good as SMtL, but it's definitely shaping up! it's so addicting. even though it's nearly been two years, can you PLEEEEEASE update?
-fairydustillusion
5/28/2011 c6 Choukou
Hmmm, I like the story, and I don't know how you react to constructive criticism, but I hope it doesn't put you off from updating because I would hate to die a miserable death at the hands of your loyal fans.
While the general plot is good, I feel like it's a little overwhelmed by the whole this-town-is-god-awful theme. It overwhelms the story and makes it depressing and irritable to read. I understand that this is the backdrop to the story, but I find it more interesting when I'm reading about Grace and Alex, not about the gossipy haters.
One other thing, Talia was the highlight of the chapter for me, which she shouldn't be because she was the heroine in the previous series. To be more precise, Talia has a backbone, and Grace lets everyone walk all over her. I have a penchant for strong heroines, but every character needs a flaw. Grace's personality and ability to handle things with grace (no pun intended) is wonderful, but some backhanded compliments or very polite snarky remarks would be greatly appreciated.
Oh dear, this is very long, so if you read the entire way through then I applaud you, and if you did so without wanting to rip me a new one, then you're a saint. I fear I sound like Mrs. Foster criticizing everything, but I really do mean well. (I spent all of last night reading the firsts series because it was so addicting). I hope this helps, and if doesn't, don't hesitate to tell me to stuff it.
Hmmm, I like the story, and I don't know how you react to constructive criticism, but I hope it doesn't put you off from updating because I would hate to die a miserable death at the hands of your loyal fans.
While the general plot is good, I feel like it's a little overwhelmed by the whole this-town-is-god-awful theme. It overwhelms the story and makes it depressing and irritable to read. I understand that this is the backdrop to the story, but I find it more interesting when I'm reading about Grace and Alex, not about the gossipy haters.
One other thing, Talia was the highlight of the chapter for me, which she shouldn't be because she was the heroine in the previous series. To be more precise, Talia has a backbone, and Grace lets everyone walk all over her. I have a penchant for strong heroines, but every character needs a flaw. Grace's personality and ability to handle things with grace (no pun intended) is wonderful, but some backhanded compliments or very polite snarky remarks would be greatly appreciated.
Oh dear, this is very long, so if you read the entire way through then I applaud you, and if you did so without wanting to rip me a new one, then you're a saint. I fear I sound like Mrs. Foster criticizing everything, but I really do mean well. (I spent all of last night reading the firsts series because it was so addicting). I hope this helps, and if doesn't, don't hesitate to tell me to stuff it.
3/19/2011 c6 1DofD
Poor Alex. Why can G just realize she loves you already and put you out of your misery.
1DofDPoor Alex. Why can G just realize she loves you already and put you out of your misery.
3/18/2011 c1 DofD
Oh goodness I was so hoping you would do more on Alex. His bad boy persona so speaks to me. XD
Oh goodness I was so hoping you would do more on Alex. His bad boy persona so speaks to me. XD
2/19/2011 c6 Lyssa
I really like your writing. The story lines are well thought out and there are not a multitude of spelling errors. I usually don't read unfinished works, and I can tell you I will be looking forward to the completion of this one.
I really like your writing. The story lines are well thought out and there are not a multitude of spelling errors. I usually don't read unfinished works, and I can tell you I will be looking forward to the completion of this one.
1/10/2011 c6 xEchoxInfernox
i like the storyline, the whole romeo & juliet thing is pretty sweet when u rite it but i have 2 say i HATE oliver WITH A PASSION. the guy pisses me off! and grace is horrible 2 alex, at least in this chapter and the last, it breaks my heat. poor alex. dont get me wrong though, i like grace i just think shes being incredibly stupid and selfish right now. i DO want alex and grace 2 get together so flippin badly lol. i saw that u havent udated this in about 2 yrs so i hope u havent given up on this. it really is good and i do like it alot. if u are gonna contine then please update soon! if not then i ask that u please let me know so i can make up my own ending in my head and make thinks all happily ever after=). not 4 ollie though, i might kill him off. insert evil laughter. =P.
i like the storyline, the whole romeo & juliet thing is pretty sweet when u rite it but i have 2 say i HATE oliver WITH A PASSION. the guy pisses me off! and grace is horrible 2 alex, at least in this chapter and the last, it breaks my heat. poor alex. dont get me wrong though, i like grace i just think shes being incredibly stupid and selfish right now. i DO want alex and grace 2 get together so flippin badly lol. i saw that u havent udated this in about 2 yrs so i hope u havent given up on this. it really is good and i do like it alot. if u are gonna contine then please update soon! if not then i ask that u please let me know so i can make up my own ending in my head and make thinks all happily ever after=). not 4 ollie though, i might kill him off. insert evil laughter. =P.
12/1/2010 c6 the-raven's-star
I'm sorry but did you hear that?
Yeah that was my heart breaking into a million pieces when i realized that there are no more chapters left to read.
I feel like a fangirl right now but OMFG
I love you're stories. I have read all the stories that you had put up on this site. I just finished reading lighthouse charlie which at the end made me squeal and get a detention considering i was on the computer in my English class. But it was defiantly worth it. I am defiantly not much of a writer but I honestly cant go a week without finishing two books at least, and I've been on this site for around 4 years now and its really hard to find good writers. I'm so happy that I've found your stories. They make my life right now. anyways i just realized how much I've written and im not going to try to guilt you into making another chapter but please tell me you have decided to continue with this story... so many times i would read something and then when i get to the middle of it the writer has just stopped writing, i have a story on alert for the past 2 years...
but even if you don't i think your brilliant. :D
I'm sorry but did you hear that?
Yeah that was my heart breaking into a million pieces when i realized that there are no more chapters left to read.
I feel like a fangirl right now but OMFG
I love you're stories. I have read all the stories that you had put up on this site. I just finished reading lighthouse charlie which at the end made me squeal and get a detention considering i was on the computer in my English class. But it was defiantly worth it. I am defiantly not much of a writer but I honestly cant go a week without finishing two books at least, and I've been on this site for around 4 years now and its really hard to find good writers. I'm so happy that I've found your stories. They make my life right now. anyways i just realized how much I've written and im not going to try to guilt you into making another chapter but please tell me you have decided to continue with this story... so many times i would read something and then when i get to the middle of it the writer has just stopped writing, i have a story on alert for the past 2 years...
but even if you don't i think your brilliant. :D