for And Now for Something Completely Different2/9/2010 c3 Lace-1812
That was DISTRESSING, man. Loved it. Cute, if a little generic. But what can you do?
Fantastic, anyway.
That was DISTRESSING, man. Loved it. Cute, if a little generic. But what can you do?
Fantastic, anyway.
1/30/2010 c2 Elber of Torou
This is creepy.
This is very creepy.
Did I mention this is creepy?
In a good way, obviously, but what can you do? I mean, anything about an evil killing doll is going to be creepy.
I have two different propositions for you (and by that I mean ideas for you to write about. Both are dialogue-based:
*"Hey," he said, "what happens if I push this?"
*"Damon, you can't do this!" I cried.
"No, Laura, I have to," Damon replied. He shouldered me away, and he hefted his sword. "What kind of hero would I be otherwise?"
"We are lost without you," I sobbed, desperation edging into my voice."
We'll see what you make of these.
I have added this to my story-subscription, just so I know when my ideas turn up into the mix. Keep up the good work.
P.S.
This is creepy.
This is creepy.
This is very creepy.
Did I mention this is creepy?
In a good way, obviously, but what can you do? I mean, anything about an evil killing doll is going to be creepy.
I have two different propositions for you (and by that I mean ideas for you to write about. Both are dialogue-based:
*"Hey," he said, "what happens if I push this?"
*"Damon, you can't do this!" I cried.
"No, Laura, I have to," Damon replied. He shouldered me away, and he hefted his sword. "What kind of hero would I be otherwise?"
"We are lost without you," I sobbed, desperation edging into my voice."
We'll see what you make of these.
I have added this to my story-subscription, just so I know when my ideas turn up into the mix. Keep up the good work.
P.S.
This is creepy.
1/20/2010 c3 Blackers
ok,ok, check this.
a story about a girl with an unusual job. she travels through all the worlds that nobody on our feblely small planet is awere of... even though these worlds were created unintentulaly by us: books,storys,mangas,folk tales,all imagination if not true in our world are true in one of manny, more distant ones. the girl (pick a name, any name) is one of the many people who helps govern these relms.she travels to worlds that she`s applyed for and bends and changes the reality of them to fit the imagination of the people who uncontiously made them. instructions are sent to her by the misterious CEO of the fate busines: Big Boss. she reflects how she was hired for this miltidimentional job through an ambassader desgised as a new student at school (let`s say the girl`s 12) suposedly because of her commen sense,love of odd and humerous literacher, and highly overactive imagination. she thinks back to all that she left behind,to forever live in books and comics as backround charactors, twisting fate in the “main charactor”'s favor, keeping an impossibly low profile, and going through similar schools,jobs, and misfourtunes countless times in order to manipulate siduations.
hm... now im thinking about using this myself. whatever. you use it. if i take this plot bunny and feed it, it`ll probably turn out less... for lack of a better word, misrable sounding than this. i cant spell anxt right so i probably cant potray it well. thanks for readin my request.have fun. :p
ok,ok, check this.
a story about a girl with an unusual job. she travels through all the worlds that nobody on our feblely small planet is awere of... even though these worlds were created unintentulaly by us: books,storys,mangas,folk tales,all imagination if not true in our world are true in one of manny, more distant ones. the girl (pick a name, any name) is one of the many people who helps govern these relms.she travels to worlds that she`s applyed for and bends and changes the reality of them to fit the imagination of the people who uncontiously made them. instructions are sent to her by the misterious CEO of the fate busines: Big Boss. she reflects how she was hired for this miltidimentional job through an ambassader desgised as a new student at school (let`s say the girl`s 12) suposedly because of her commen sense,love of odd and humerous literacher, and highly overactive imagination. she thinks back to all that she left behind,to forever live in books and comics as backround charactors, twisting fate in the “main charactor”'s favor, keeping an impossibly low profile, and going through similar schools,jobs, and misfourtunes countless times in order to manipulate siduations.
hm... now im thinking about using this myself. whatever. you use it. if i take this plot bunny and feed it, it`ll probably turn out less... for lack of a better word, misrable sounding than this. i cant spell anxt right so i probably cant potray it well. thanks for readin my request.have fun. :p
10/5/2009 c2 Lace-1812
Lubbly. Oo! My turn! Can you please incorporate Ms. A. dancing on a massive orange into someone's story? Please?
And it's gotta be SERIOUS, ginger ninja...
hahahahaha- liked the creepy doll, that should RETURN.
Lubbly. Oo! My turn! Can you please incorporate Ms. A. dancing on a massive orange into someone's story? Please?
And it's gotta be SERIOUS, ginger ninja...
hahahahaha- liked the creepy doll, that should RETURN.
8/14/2009 c2 
26Mirabella
Wonderful!
I really loved the simplicity of the ending line, after the well described story, it just seemed so perfect. :)
26MirabellaWonderful!
I really loved the simplicity of the ending line, after the well described story, it just seemed so perfect. :)
8/13/2009 c2 2Quintessentila
Hey, again. this sounds like fun, although if I thought of something I'd probably write it myself. In something I have on ff, the chapters are entitled "In Which xyz happens"
Yep, time to do something non-computer related for an hour or so. I'm getting weird again.
Sorry about that.
The story is REALLY good. If completely disturbing . . . Sunshine, rainbows, spongebob .
2QuintessentilaHey, again. this sounds like fun, although if I thought of something I'd probably write it myself. In something I have on ff, the chapters are entitled "In Which xyz happens"
Yep, time to do something non-computer related for an hour or so. I'm getting weird again.
Sorry about that.
The story is REALLY good. If completely disturbing . . . Sunshine, rainbows, spongebob .
8/13/2009 c2 LolBookWorm
Sorry i was too lazy to log in
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Anyways, freaky doll... i'll post up any ideas as soon as they deem to appear :D
Sorry i was too lazy to log in
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Anyways, freaky doll... i'll post up any ideas as soon as they deem to appear :D
8/12/2009 c1 3HiddenFact
Fantastic idea, although you could stand to flesh out the stories a bit more.
Your next piece: a young woman caught in the rain, a roll of Duct tape, a lost earring.
Can't wait for the next one.
3HiddenFactFantastic idea, although you could stand to flesh out the stories a bit more.
Your next piece: a young woman caught in the rain, a roll of Duct tape, a lost earring.
Can't wait for the next one.
8/12/2009 c2 2Astarel
O.O Nice! I liked the wet cardboard bit, strangely. And the evil talking doll with the knife. Yay!
2AstarelO.O Nice! I liked the wet cardboard bit, strangely. And the evil talking doll with the knife. Yay!