8/22/2009 c1 9Sakina the Fallen Angel
I liked the shortness and simplicity of this piece because it was complete in itself, and described very well. However, I was confused by this whole section:

"I still don't understand." He said to his bestfriend. She gave him a sad smile in return, and told him, "You don't have to. No matter what happens, you know I'll always be there for you."

I couldn't follow who was speaking as I think there may be an error two there.

~ Sakina x

8/12/2009 c1 1Narsha
Short, simple, and wonderful. I love that you didn't put in the character's names. It really added to the tone of this. Their ineratcion was subtle, yet very touching and strong. Loved it. =)