for Thoughtless4/22/2013 c6 Aeris.Lockheart507
omg i cannot believe youre finally publishing! :) im so happy for you.. i read your stories in 2011 or so before you removed them! This was before I had an account T_T.. Well done! :) lol i wana buy your books EffortleSs and Thoughtless :D
omg i cannot believe youre finally publishing! :) im so happy for you.. i read your stories in 2011 or so before you removed them! This was before I had an account T_T.. Well done! :) lol i wana buy your books EffortleSs and Thoughtless :D
4/13/2013 c26 livchums
(I'm sorry if there are any spoilers!)
So this book is really something! I was hooked from start to finish, I don't think I have ever been through so many emotions whilst reading a book. I was so frustrated throughout this book, but that is why I loved it so much, at one point I wanted to go in there and shout at Kiera to make up her mind! I loved the love between her and Denny, although I was always rooting for Kellan. I liked how you made both guys equally loveable instead of the cliché, when the other guy turns into a complete ass. I LOVED KELLAN! I think you wrote him perfectly. However, I was quite worried about the ending ruining the whole book ( like most cliché books out there) but instead you surprised me, I loved the way you've shown that their relationship isn't perfect and they have got issues still that they need to work through instead of the 'and they all lived happily ever after' kind of ending. I feel like that was the perfect ending for them and I honestly thank you for sharing your story.
However, although I LOVED this story, I just cannot bring myself to read the sequels. I feel like I am more then happy with the ending and I feel like that is all I need to know about their story. I just don't think my mind and heart can take the frustration. Although, that does not mean that I won't read this story over and over again, because I am pretty sure I will.
I have also read your story, Collision Course, which is another amazing book. I cried throughout that story and I thoroughly recommend everyone to read it and if you have only read the preview to thoughtless then I recommend you buy it now (it's so totally worth it).
Also, congratulations for being published. You deserve it!x
(I'm sorry if there are any spoilers!)
So this book is really something! I was hooked from start to finish, I don't think I have ever been through so many emotions whilst reading a book. I was so frustrated throughout this book, but that is why I loved it so much, at one point I wanted to go in there and shout at Kiera to make up her mind! I loved the love between her and Denny, although I was always rooting for Kellan. I liked how you made both guys equally loveable instead of the cliché, when the other guy turns into a complete ass. I LOVED KELLAN! I think you wrote him perfectly. However, I was quite worried about the ending ruining the whole book ( like most cliché books out there) but instead you surprised me, I loved the way you've shown that their relationship isn't perfect and they have got issues still that they need to work through instead of the 'and they all lived happily ever after' kind of ending. I feel like that was the perfect ending for them and I honestly thank you for sharing your story.
However, although I LOVED this story, I just cannot bring myself to read the sequels. I feel like I am more then happy with the ending and I feel like that is all I need to know about their story. I just don't think my mind and heart can take the frustration. Although, that does not mean that I won't read this story over and over again, because I am pretty sure I will.
I have also read your story, Collision Course, which is another amazing book. I cried throughout that story and I thoroughly recommend everyone to read it and if you have only read the preview to thoughtless then I recommend you buy it now (it's so totally worth it).
Also, congratulations for being published. You deserve it!x
4/3/2013 c1 Dbnichols
I have read both books - thoughtless and effortless, they are amazing. I am fixing to order my e-book Reckless right now, I can not wait to read it. I know you hear this a lot (or I hope you do) I think you are a wonderful writer and I love getting lost in your books. Long story short, I'm a teacher and I got sick two years ago and had to stop work. It's been a long road, but reading has helped keep my mind off things. You know leave real life for a short period. Your books really helped, it was nice to look at someone else's problems, especially since I new the weren't real (though sometimes I would forget these weren't real people). That is the sign of a really amazing writer! So thanks :)
I have read both books - thoughtless and effortless, they are amazing. I am fixing to order my e-book Reckless right now, I can not wait to read it. I know you hear this a lot (or I hope you do) I think you are a wonderful writer and I love getting lost in your books. Long story short, I'm a teacher and I got sick two years ago and had to stop work. It's been a long road, but reading has helped keep my mind off things. You know leave real life for a short period. Your books really helped, it was nice to look at someone else's problems, especially since I new the weren't real (though sometimes I would forget these weren't real people). That is the sign of a really amazing writer! So thanks :)
4/13/2012 c1 KayeFranz
I'm a big fan of your work! I love thoughtless and effortless the most. I saw that you posted the original ending of thoughtless. I found it heartaching but really good. Although, I thank you for making an alternate ending which led to one of my favorite sequels I've ever read. At first I thought it would be a typical, boring sequel but I was exhilarated when I found out it wasn't!
I'm a big fan of your work! I love thoughtless and effortless the most. I saw that you posted the original ending of thoughtless. I found it heartaching but really good. Although, I thank you for making an alternate ending which led to one of my favorite sequels I've ever read. At first I thought it would be a typical, boring sequel but I was exhilarated when I found out it wasn't!
11/24/2011 c26 anjali
LOVE! this book soo much
LOVE! this book soo much
11/12/2011 c1 stanhops
I had read this story before, and loved it so much I knew I had to show my love in a more formal way and purchased it to read to my heart's content. Keep on writing; your talent is one of a kind!
I had read this story before, and loved it so much I knew I had to show my love in a more formal way and purchased it to read to my heart's content. Keep on writing; your talent is one of a kind!
11/11/2011 c19 Larkkb
Wow this sucks! I was really looking forward to reading what else went on. Lmao. But I realllly liked the story so far. I think she should be with kellan instead of Denny :)
Wow this sucks! I was really looking forward to reading what else went on. Lmao. But I realllly liked the story so far. I think she should be with kellan instead of Denny :)
11/2/2011 c1 llama828
I've probably read this story 10 times and I think each time I read it I fall more in love with it!
Best book ever!:D
I've probably read this story 10 times and I think each time I read it I fall more in love with it!
Best book ever!:D
10/21/2011 c1 Holly Jay Platt
Hey, just want to say congrats on publishing! I'm glad I downloaded when I had the chance. I hope it sells the way it should.
Cheers!
Holly J.
Hey, just want to say congrats on publishing! I'm glad I downloaded when I had the chance. I hope it sells the way it should.
Cheers!
Holly J.
9/22/2011 c21 
1Neha123
I was really getting into this story. Its a shame though, you cut off half way through just so you can get people to pay for reading the rest. Why put your story up on FictionPress in the first place? :/
1Neha123I was really getting into this story. Its a shame though, you cut off half way through just so you can get people to pay for reading the rest. Why put your story up on FictionPress in the first place? :/
9/4/2011 c26 AfricanChieftess
I loved this story! It was warm and deep...simply wonderful!
At some point I was so mad at Kiera for being so weak and playing those guys like that! I suppose when you have two fellas feeling so strongly about you when you've only been with one guy, your head swells a little bit. I kinda hoped that Denny was cheating on her when he was in Arizona(?), which would have made it easier for them to part ways. I'm a little delusional :)
Despite it all, even being team Kellan, wasn't Denny a little too...perfect? Until he gave Kellan a beating, he seemed a little too good to be true...
Anyway, I'm glad to see Kellan and his lady love together - looking forward to reading Effortless!
I loved this story! It was warm and deep...simply wonderful!
At some point I was so mad at Kiera for being so weak and playing those guys like that! I suppose when you have two fellas feeling so strongly about you when you've only been with one guy, your head swells a little bit. I kinda hoped that Denny was cheating on her when he was in Arizona(?), which would have made it easier for them to part ways. I'm a little delusional :)
Despite it all, even being team Kellan, wasn't Denny a little too...perfect? Until he gave Kellan a beating, he seemed a little too good to be true...
Anyway, I'm glad to see Kellan and his lady love together - looking forward to reading Effortless!
8/27/2011 c26 1In the Heights
I absolutely loved this story, and your amazing writing technique!
I'd also like to say that, as much as I wanted to be mad at Kiera when she was so indecisive about Kellan and Denny, I really can't.
I mean, love is never easy, and it really can be downright scary. There are people who are terrified of love, me being one of them.
So really, it's totally reasonable, to me, for Kiera to have wanted to hold on to the easiness she had with Denny, and been scared of the fiery passion she had with Kellan.
I've always been a sucker for a happy ending, so I'm really glad that they ended up together, and that in general, everyone ended up happy and living their lives the way they should be.
So amazing job with this story, I'm glad to have stumbled upon it through the SKOW Awards, and I can't wait to read Effortless!
1In the HeightsI absolutely loved this story, and your amazing writing technique!
I'd also like to say that, as much as I wanted to be mad at Kiera when she was so indecisive about Kellan and Denny, I really can't.
I mean, love is never easy, and it really can be downright scary. There are people who are terrified of love, me being one of them.
So really, it's totally reasonable, to me, for Kiera to have wanted to hold on to the easiness she had with Denny, and been scared of the fiery passion she had with Kellan.
I've always been a sucker for a happy ending, so I'm really glad that they ended up together, and that in general, everyone ended up happy and living their lives the way they should be.
So amazing job with this story, I'm glad to have stumbled upon it through the SKOW Awards, and I can't wait to read Effortless!
7/31/2011 c26 1Pretend Jane
Sorry about my little rant before, but Keira seriously annoyed me. I thought after she and Kellan exchanged I love Yous she'd get a clue, but she was still stuck on stupid.
I really enjoyed this story. Even though Keira angered me, I was happy she and Kellan got together...for Kellan's sake. I say that because he's never had love his whole life, he looked for it in the wrong places, and when he finds it,finally, he has a girl that treats him and Denny like a yo-yo.
I'm not saying Kellan was innocent, but I think I could understand him more. Keira just seemed like a blind idiot who wanted her cake and eat it too. She would have gone on having both men if she could. Even though she knew she loved Kellan more. Her cowardly actions frustrated me and I just lost respect for her. Which is too bad because she seemed like a promising character in the beginning.
It just bugged me that her sister had to force her to go see Kellan again. I felt like she should have been on her knees doing anything to win Kellan back after she played with his heart like that. It bugged me how she so easily stayed in contact with Denny yet didn't even have the guts to go to to Kellan on her own.
I'm glad Kellan's happy, but if I knew someone like Keira in real life, I would only tolerate her for Kellan's sake. Because after all, I am a romantic at heart and believe people should be with who they love. It's just sometimes that person they love might not truly deserve him.
1Pretend JaneSorry about my little rant before, but Keira seriously annoyed me. I thought after she and Kellan exchanged I love Yous she'd get a clue, but she was still stuck on stupid.
I really enjoyed this story. Even though Keira angered me, I was happy she and Kellan got together...for Kellan's sake. I say that because he's never had love his whole life, he looked for it in the wrong places, and when he finds it,finally, he has a girl that treats him and Denny like a yo-yo.
I'm not saying Kellan was innocent, but I think I could understand him more. Keira just seemed like a blind idiot who wanted her cake and eat it too. She would have gone on having both men if she could. Even though she knew she loved Kellan more. Her cowardly actions frustrated me and I just lost respect for her. Which is too bad because she seemed like a promising character in the beginning.
It just bugged me that her sister had to force her to go see Kellan again. I felt like she should have been on her knees doing anything to win Kellan back after she played with his heart like that. It bugged me how she so easily stayed in contact with Denny yet didn't even have the guts to go to to Kellan on her own.
I'm glad Kellan's happy, but if I knew someone like Keira in real life, I would only tolerate her for Kellan's sake. Because after all, I am a romantic at heart and believe people should be with who they love. It's just sometimes that person they love might not truly deserve him.