for Thoughtless7/31/2011 c26 Illuminated93
Wow okie so I recently made a FP account after reading your story and I gotta say this was well written! Your a talented author and your writing style and the way you describe and portray your characters is amazing because it makes u feel like your in the story! I finished this story in 2 days reading nonstop and there were points when I was frustrated with Kiera's behavior and the decisions she made but I could understand her plight and in the end i'm glad she ended up with Kellan! There were times when I felt horrible for Denny but he managed to pull through and although Denny and Kiera were that cute couple they didn't have the spark and fire that Kiera and Kellan had and it just made them different :) Please continue to write because your stories are amazing!
Wow okie so I recently made a FP account after reading your story and I gotta say this was well written! Your a talented author and your writing style and the way you describe and portray your characters is amazing because it makes u feel like your in the story! I finished this story in 2 days reading nonstop and there were points when I was frustrated with Kiera's behavior and the decisions she made but I could understand her plight and in the end i'm glad she ended up with Kellan! There were times when I felt horrible for Denny but he managed to pull through and although Denny and Kiera were that cute couple they didn't have the spark and fire that Kiera and Kellan had and it just made them different :) Please continue to write because your stories are amazing!
7/31/2011 c22 
1Pretend Jane
I really like this story...mostly because of Kellan. But I've never hated a protagonist more than Keira. She doesn't deserve any of the guys in my opinion. She was so selfish in her relationship with Denny. Basically forced him to choose her over a great job. Then Kellan loved her so much and she was so blind to it for so long. The way she went back and forth sleeping with both guys seriously disgusted me and made me hate her. I tried to find some sympathy for her. I hope she's able to be redeemed by the time this story is over, but right now I just don't like her and feel bad that the one person Kellan loved has treated him so badly again and again. It just annoyed me how she got annoyed with Kellan for sleeping around when she was basically driving him to it.
I will just stop this rant and finish the story. Keira just really annoys me and I don't think she deserves either of these great guys.
1Pretend JaneI really like this story...mostly because of Kellan. But I've never hated a protagonist more than Keira. She doesn't deserve any of the guys in my opinion. She was so selfish in her relationship with Denny. Basically forced him to choose her over a great job. Then Kellan loved her so much and she was so blind to it for so long. The way she went back and forth sleeping with both guys seriously disgusted me and made me hate her. I tried to find some sympathy for her. I hope she's able to be redeemed by the time this story is over, but right now I just don't like her and feel bad that the one person Kellan loved has treated him so badly again and again. It just annoyed me how she got annoyed with Kellan for sleeping around when she was basically driving him to it.
I will just stop this rant and finish the story. Keira just really annoys me and I don't think she deserves either of these great guys.
7/29/2011 c28 1taHAYla
WOW! That was amazing!
I can't tell you how many nights I stayed up nearly all night reading this! WOW! I am extremely sad it is finished, but it was an amazing ending!
1taHAYlaWOW! That was amazing!
I can't tell you how many nights I stayed up nearly all night reading this! WOW! I am extremely sad it is finished, but it was an amazing ending!
7/29/2011 c27 critic
You are an amazing writer. Would there be a sequel? I want to see kellan make it big and how their relationship will work out :D
You are an amazing writer. Would there be a sequel? I want to see kellan make it big and how their relationship will work out :D
7/29/2011 c22 NicerTwin
I cried like a fucking baby reading this chapter...when kellan was singing that song, i wept right alongside him
I cried like a fucking baby reading this chapter...when kellan was singing that song, i wept right alongside him
7/29/2011 c20 NicerTwin
oh man. she really isnt gonna give denny up, huh? their relationship is soooo complicated!
oh man. she really isnt gonna give denny up, huh? their relationship is soooo complicated!
7/29/2011 c19 NicerTwin
wow, kiera can really go batshit crazy when she's jealous. does this mean she's accepting to be in an affair with kellan or is she gonna finally dump denny?
wow, kiera can really go batshit crazy when she's jealous. does this mean she's accepting to be in an affair with kellan or is she gonna finally dump denny?
7/29/2011 c17 NicerTwin
This story is making my heart hurt. That's a compliment, since your writing must be incredibly good to move me like that.
This story is making my heart hurt. That's a compliment, since your writing must be incredibly good to move me like that.
7/27/2011 c26 1bookADDICT6
Can't believe that it's over. This story had so less chapters than other stories, but it felt just as long. There was so much action and drama going on, I felt like I literally read an entire book.
Amazing job, I'm surely going to look at your other stories ;)
1bookADDICT6Can't believe that it's over. This story had so less chapters than other stories, but it felt just as long. There was so much action and drama going on, I felt like I literally read an entire book.
Amazing job, I'm surely going to look at your other stories ;)
7/27/2011 c25 bookADDICT6
I got so emotional during this chapter. It's so hard to say goodbyes, whether it's living things or non-living. Either everything is going to go right in the last chapter, or there's a sequel. (I'm hoping for a sequel if things don't end great.)
I got so emotional during this chapter. It's so hard to say goodbyes, whether it's living things or non-living. Either everything is going to go right in the last chapter, or there's a sequel. (I'm hoping for a sequel if things don't end great.)
7/27/2011 c24 bookADDICT6
This chapter was filled with so much dark emotions, it was a bit hard to read at first.
This chapter was filled with so much dark emotions, it was a bit hard to read at first.
7/27/2011 c23 bookADDICT6
I'm not liking Denny right now, because he's all angry and stuff. I just feel super bad for everyone :'(
I'm not liking Denny right now, because he's all angry and stuff. I just feel super bad for everyone :'(