for Falling in Love: Queen Bee Style5/9/2012 c1 
8theKnobblyKneedWriter
I really like this original twist on the cliche story :) Wonderful.
8theKnobblyKneedWriterI really like this original twist on the cliche story :) Wonderful.
11/26/2009 c1 Guest
Be careful how you use "too" "to" and "two"... and rethink your sentence structures... but the idea of the story is good!
Be careful how you use "too" "to" and "two"... and rethink your sentence structures... but the idea of the story is good!
11/26/2009 c1 49Pinkamoo
I heart how they dress too. You know, aside from the pants half way down the ass thing and the smoking thing. But that's not just with skaters. Hate it so much. Especially when people try to do it around me. Anyway, loved it, great job! :D I also like your main character. She's cool.
49PinkamooI heart how they dress too. You know, aside from the pants half way down the ass thing and the smoking thing. But that's not just with skaters. Hate it so much. Especially when people try to do it around me. Anyway, loved it, great job! :D I also like your main character. She's cool.
10/24/2009 c1 Perpetual Romantic
I'm not going to lie... I was slightly offended by this. I hope you didn't intentionally mean to do that, but I've been a gymnast for 6 years and I've been on my school's Varsity cheer team for about three months.
I think this kind of falls into stereotypes, and it really bothers me because cheerleading and gymnastics (especially competitive, the kind I did), are difficult to do. Plus, I'm not sure about other people's schools, but my school's cheer coaches run the tryouts, not the cheerleaders. They can't just kick people out because they don't like them.
I'm not going to lie... I was slightly offended by this. I hope you didn't intentionally mean to do that, but I've been a gymnast for 6 years and I've been on my school's Varsity cheer team for about three months.
I think this kind of falls into stereotypes, and it really bothers me because cheerleading and gymnastics (especially competitive, the kind I did), are difficult to do. Plus, I'm not sure about other people's schools, but my school's cheer coaches run the tryouts, not the cheerleaders. They can't just kick people out because they don't like them.
9/13/2009 c1 1Damned to heaven
That was a really good story. I liked the mean girl perspective. Your other one shots are lovely and adorable too. You're a good writer. Whilst wandering around your profile I read about your erm unexplainable love for the quote by William Congreve which I found funny since I love that quote a lot for some inexplicable reason lol. Btw did you know thats not the entire quote,if you didn't well the real quote is 'Heav'n hath no rage like love to hatred turn'd nor hell a fury like a woman scorned',both are lovely. Anyway back to the story skater boys rock and I'm glad Deigha got hers.
1Damned to heavenThat was a really good story. I liked the mean girl perspective. Your other one shots are lovely and adorable too. You're a good writer. Whilst wandering around your profile I read about your erm unexplainable love for the quote by William Congreve which I found funny since I love that quote a lot for some inexplicable reason lol. Btw did you know thats not the entire quote,if you didn't well the real quote is 'Heav'n hath no rage like love to hatred turn'd nor hell a fury like a woman scorned',both are lovely. Anyway back to the story skater boys rock and I'm glad Deigha got hers.
8/17/2009 c1 3Katie Valentine
Definitely not so mean... I do like her character though, somehow! :D It's a cute story.
3Katie ValentineDefinitely not so mean... I do like her character though, somehow! :D It's a cute story.
8/15/2009 c1 fatso17
A few grammatical errors and spelling errors like using "to" instead of "too" or "of instead of "off". Interesting idea though. :D
A few grammatical errors and spelling errors like using "to" instead of "too" or "of instead of "off". Interesting idea though. :D