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8FlamingInk57
Awesome poem. Loved the whole thing. I love the whole meaning behind it and it's very well written and sounds perfect. I really like the last line. Great job!
8FlamingInk57Awesome poem. Loved the whole thing. I love the whole meaning behind it and it's very well written and sounds perfect. I really like the last line. Great job!
9/6/2011 c1 JessicaLynn109
I like this :) I don't usually read poetry but I decided to give it a try. I am really suckish at writing poetry. You should look up "How Do I Love Thee" I found that poem in a book I read not to long ago. It was the first poem I've actually liked. Well, bye now!
I like this :) I don't usually read poetry but I decided to give it a try. I am really suckish at writing poetry. You should look up "How Do I Love Thee" I found that poem in a book I read not to long ago. It was the first poem I've actually liked. Well, bye now!
9/1/2011 c1 31HeroofEnelios
You deserve two thumbs up with this poem here, it's very well written and flows very smoothly, and has meaning. Very nice.
31HeroofEneliosYou deserve two thumbs up with this poem here, it's very well written and flows very smoothly, and has meaning. Very nice.
9/1/2011 c1 15disrhythmic
Love this. :) The message is wonderful, the title fits perfectly, and that first line is just absolute gold. Fantastic. ^^
15disrhythmicLove this. :) The message is wonderful, the title fits perfectly, and that first line is just absolute gold. Fantastic. ^^