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9/11/2011 c1 8FlamingInk57
Awesome poem. Loved the whole thing. I love the whole meaning behind it and it's very well written and sounds perfect. I really like the last line. Great job!
9/6/2011 c1 JessicaLynn109
I like this :) I don't usually read poetry but I decided to give it a try. I am really suckish at writing poetry. You should look up "How Do I Love Thee" I found that poem in a book I read not to long ago. It was the first poem I've actually liked. Well, bye now!
9/1/2011 c1 31HeroofEnelios
You deserve two thumbs up with this poem here, it's very well written and flows very smoothly, and has meaning. Very nice.
9/1/2011 c1 15disrhythmic
Love this. :) The message is wonderful, the title fits perfectly, and that first line is just absolute gold. Fantastic. ^^
8/15/2009 c1 1underrose
i like it; nicely done.

"if this world had been flat" sort of reminds me of one of my own poems (simple mathematics) (:

it nicely sums up the chances of coincedinces.

well done,


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