for Bittersweet Innocence3/21/2010 c5 
10xXAtelophobiaXx
This was awesome! Please update it soon! So curious to see what happens!
10xXAtelophobiaXxThis was awesome! Please update it soon! So curious to see what happens!
2/19/2010 c5 15collypollyy
I was just thinking about this story three days ago actually. I'm so glad you updated. Anyway, this story is amazing. and I love the tension between them. And you show that very well in your writing!
Great chapter! :) update soon!
15collypollyyI was just thinking about this story three days ago actually. I'm so glad you updated. Anyway, this story is amazing. and I love the tension between them. And you show that very well in your writing!
Great chapter! :) update soon!
1/11/2010 c4 notyourbiz
damn this shit is the bomb. O my jesus u should see the smile on my face, evrything just got ten times hotter! lolz I hope you pdate soon!
damn this shit is the bomb. O my jesus u should see the smile on my face, evrything just got ten times hotter! lolz I hope you pdate soon!
10/27/2009 c4 15collypollyy
aw thank you for the shot out! :)
I really want you to update this! This is like such a cliffhanger chapter. Its like I want to know what she was REALLY thinking. If she really has true feelings.
Well please update soon! :)
great job! :)
15collypollyyaw thank you for the shot out! :)
I really want you to update this! This is like such a cliffhanger chapter. Its like I want to know what she was REALLY thinking. If she really has true feelings.
Well please update soon! :)
great job! :)
10/24/2009 c3 2ginger555
I liked the story...i'm getting a bit impatient but keep up the good work ^^
2ginger555I liked the story...i'm getting a bit impatient but keep up the good work ^^
10/10/2009 c3 15collypollyy
Aw! So cute! You are such an amazing writer. I really hope you publish something one day. I would def buy it!
Well wonderful "filler"! :) It seems like it is leading somewhere. :)
15collypollyyAw! So cute! You are such an amazing writer. I really hope you publish something one day. I would def buy it!
Well wonderful "filler"! :) It seems like it is leading somewhere. :)
10/10/2009 c3 3hannah1016776
You said it's leading somewhere i think...
Just a bit of advice, but you should probably plan out your story before you write it, maybe just writing some brief notes on what's going to happen in each chapter.
Though, otherwise i like it and update soon.
3hannah1016776You said it's leading somewhere i think...
Just a bit of advice, but you should probably plan out your story before you write it, maybe just writing some brief notes on what's going to happen in each chapter.
Though, otherwise i like it and update soon.