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9/27/2009 c2 kawenchan
Aw such a cute start! I can't wait for more. :)
9/27/2009 c2 inuyasha112
great chapter!
9/26/2009 c2 3hannah1016776
Please update yellow soon
9/26/2009 c2 JEN-JO
Great chapter, thanks for updating, can't wait for more
9/20/2009 c1 lighty-creamy
keep going
9/12/2009 c1 JEN-JO
Great start, i really like the relationship and how you havent gone straight into anything too deep, which just makes it more believeable.

I like the humour as it didnt come across as trying to be funny it just happened.

You should definiatly continue.
9/10/2009 c1 25kelly14215
hey great start 2 the story, please continue! Love Kellyx
8/25/2009 c1 hopeless romantic292
I like it. It's good so far.
8/18/2009 c1 1TerribleTanner
Yes, continue! :( if not ill be sad.. and you should continue yellow.
8/16/2009 c1 Your local anti-hero
I think it's a yes and You should stick with thrid person. I like it, very original! I usally see alot of popular guy and loser girl fiction, so it's a nice change. Can't wait for the next update :)
8/16/2009 c1 Lexy7432
That was halarious, and i would love for you to continue plz :)
8/16/2009 c1 Alexa Jayy
It's pre good(:

I like it very much.

You should write...type? MORE :D
8/16/2009 c1 10Koki Enwai
Hey, this looks pretty good so far. I love the, er, oddness of the circumstances of their relationship. It makes it all the more interesting.

Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. You've got serious talent! :)

- KE
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