4/5/2010 c5 sappyromancelvr
Glad to hear that you haven't given up on this story!
Look forward to your next chapters :)
Glad to hear that you haven't given up on this story!
Look forward to your next chapters :)
4/5/2010 c5 1Ailen-Reid
Worry not, I completely understand. I understand how hard it is to have school, and then a semi social life and then try to write on top of it all! It's a great story and I'll be there when you can update!
Take as much time as you need!
Worry not, I completely understand. I understand how hard it is to have school, and then a semi social life and then try to write on top of it all! It's a great story and I'll be there when you can update!
Take as much time as you need!
10/17/2009 c4 1Ailen-Reid
THAT WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! It was funny because I was thinking about this story a bit earlier and I checked my email and I thought you were magical! YOU ARE THE BEST!
Great descriptions in this chapter bytheway!
THAT WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! It was funny because I was thinking about this story a bit earlier and I checked my email and I thought you were magical! YOU ARE THE BEST!
Great descriptions in this chapter bytheway!
10/17/2009 c4 4LaMeO1
yeah...i like him too
i'm definitely still reading
this story is interesting
and you definitely need to update =]
o man...UPDATE
=D
p.s. great chapter
yeah...i like him too
i'm definitely still reading
this story is interesting
and you definitely need to update =]
o man...UPDATE
=D
p.s. great chapter
10/17/2009 c4 3St. Clair
I really like that this is in the third person. Too many high school romances out there are written entirely in first, so it's refreshing to see something in third - because I prefer it that way. (Ok, so I'm a bit narrow-minded but hey...)
Anyway I'm liking this story so far. I'm trying to decide who I like better - Cayden or Reese - and so far I can't figure out who. It's a good thing though, lol. Keep going with this story, I'm liking it a lot. (Also loving the name 'Bryce')
P.S. Yay for hockey. It's my favourite sport :)
I really like that this is in the third person. Too many high school romances out there are written entirely in first, so it's refreshing to see something in third - because I prefer it that way. (Ok, so I'm a bit narrow-minded but hey...)
Anyway I'm liking this story so far. I'm trying to decide who I like better - Cayden or Reese - and so far I can't figure out who. It's a good thing though, lol. Keep going with this story, I'm liking it a lot. (Also loving the name 'Bryce')
P.S. Yay for hockey. It's my favourite sport :)
9/4/2009 c3 1written in pixels
WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM?
the suspense is killing me!
=P
hm...I would ask Cayden...when he started playing hockey, or why he got interested in it...?
haha, yeah, stupid question. just like, about hockey.
awesome sport.
=] great chapter!
WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM?
the suspense is killing me!
=P
hm...I would ask Cayden...when he started playing hockey, or why he got interested in it...?
haha, yeah, stupid question. just like, about hockey.
awesome sport.
=] great chapter!
9/3/2009 c3 4LaMeO1
this is really interesting
cayden was really rude there
and man what is in their past?
update soon
=D
this is really interesting
cayden was really rude there
and man what is in their past?
update soon
=D
9/3/2009 c3 1Ailen-Reid
*sniffle* I want MORE! THAT WAS AWESOME! Wonder why he was kicked out.. I may have not read something that explains it, or maybe your striking the reader to wonder, and if so it IS working!
GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY! I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! (I don't know why i'm saying things in three...)
*sniffle* I want MORE! THAT WAS AWESOME! Wonder why he was kicked out.. I may have not read something that explains it, or maybe your striking the reader to wonder, and if so it IS working!
GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY! I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! (I don't know why i'm saying things in three...)
9/3/2009 c3 CoralKay
Love this story! Please post the next chapter ASAP.
Also I love the character of Reese!
Love this story! Please post the next chapter ASAP.
Also I love the character of Reese!
8/25/2009 c2 1written in pixels
haha, yeah you got the username right. sorry, it's kind of confusing. =D
anyways, i really liked this chapter! i like Cayden's personality so far. good job! i can't wait until the next chapter!
:]
(cute nicknames by the way! i loved 'reese's pieces')
haha, yeah you got the username right. sorry, it's kind of confusing. =D
anyways, i really liked this chapter! i like Cayden's personality so far. good job! i can't wait until the next chapter!
:]
(cute nicknames by the way! i loved 'reese's pieces')
8/25/2009 c2 sparkles
gah. i'm mclovin it. it's cliched, yes, but i'm a sucker for these types of stories. update please! :)
gah. i'm mclovin it. it's cliched, yes, but i'm a sucker for these types of stories. update please! :)
8/25/2009 c2 14Blossoming Hibiscus
You're a really good writer! I hope you know that! I mean, I can't write in third person at all, but you do it great! I hope to be reading more soon!
You're a really good writer! I hope you know that! I mean, I can't write in third person at all, but you do it great! I hope to be reading more soon!