8/18/2009 c1 1faienceface
Hee! That was good. Really good all-dialogue approach, which is one way to get rid of the 'said bookism' problem, and, if done right, is really slick.
Oh, and props of course for all the hot, hot alphabetized sex.
Though your explanation AT THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE of what the alphabet game is struck me as kinda funny. Because, well, if the reader hasn't caught on by then, then one has to wonder what the hell ass butt they are doing on the internet.
Cheers!
Hee! That was good. Really good all-dialogue approach, which is one way to get rid of the 'said bookism' problem, and, if done right, is really slick.
Oh, and props of course for all the hot, hot alphabetized sex.
Though your explanation AT THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE of what the alphabet game is struck me as kinda funny. Because, well, if the reader hasn't caught on by then, then one has to wonder what the hell ass butt they are doing on the internet.
Cheers!