for Watched7/25/2015 c15 
6Carmel March
What a great ending to this story! I was so happy to see this update, and I loved the way you decided to close the story. It was perfectly fitting. Thank you so much for writing and posting this! :)
6Carmel MarchWhat a great ending to this story! I was so happy to see this update, and I loved the way you decided to close the story. It was perfectly fitting. Thank you so much for writing and posting this! :)
7/24/2015 c15 Guest
I really love this. The fact you never named the main two characters was, in my opinion, a perfect way to force the reader to look at them as human beings and value their personalities more than whatever connotations would come with names. I read a previous comment that said it makes no sense that she would be interested in him based on window dining - each to their own, of course, but I think that's quite a shallow way of looking at it. It's not the window dining so much as the mystery and intrigue it would invoke - the desire to know more. All in all, I think this is wonderful.
I really love this. The fact you never named the main two characters was, in my opinion, a perfect way to force the reader to look at them as human beings and value their personalities more than whatever connotations would come with names. I read a previous comment that said it makes no sense that she would be interested in him based on window dining - each to their own, of course, but I think that's quite a shallow way of looking at it. It's not the window dining so much as the mystery and intrigue it would invoke - the desire to know more. All in all, I think this is wonderful.
7/22/2015 c15 augmentedDREAMS
This story could be a perfect example of the saying, "actions speak louder than words."
I love the way how you hardly divulge anything about the main characters- let alone their names- yet they have more of a personality than any other story's character whose entire life story has been laid out for the readers.
I actually like that you haven't given the main characters names, in my opinion it gives them some sort of individuality. I cannot compare them to anyone whose name corresponds with theirs neither can my opinion about them be influenced because of their names.
You have written a beautiful story that stays true to it's plot and characters. I absolutely loved it.
This story could be a perfect example of the saying, "actions speak louder than words."
I love the way how you hardly divulge anything about the main characters- let alone their names- yet they have more of a personality than any other story's character whose entire life story has been laid out for the readers.
I actually like that you haven't given the main characters names, in my opinion it gives them some sort of individuality. I cannot compare them to anyone whose name corresponds with theirs neither can my opinion about them be influenced because of their names.
You have written a beautiful story that stays true to it's plot and characters. I absolutely loved it.
7/19/2015 c15 LetMeWonder
Oh my gosh! I'm so happy they get another chance! Thank you for the great read.
Oh my gosh! I'm so happy they get another chance! Thank you for the great read.
7/19/2015 c5 43zanybellecloudo
I'm sorry I do not get this story at all. It doesn't seem like a romance more a twisted fantasy. It makes no sense why she would be interested in him based on window dining. It's actually even stranger to suggest she'd visit him after his vulgar antics. Maybe this is more smutty than romantic and perhaps builds to believable emotional situations but the main character comes across as grossly unappealing so I can't see how. Sorry.
43zanybellecloudoI'm sorry I do not get this story at all. It doesn't seem like a romance more a twisted fantasy. It makes no sense why she would be interested in him based on window dining. It's actually even stranger to suggest she'd visit him after his vulgar antics. Maybe this is more smutty than romantic and perhaps builds to believable emotional situations but the main character comes across as grossly unappealing so I can't see how. Sorry.
3/18/2015 c14 6Carmel March
So glad to see an update, and it certainly was worth the wait! Really great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
6Carmel MarchSo glad to see an update, and it certainly was worth the wait! Really great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/16/2015 c14 Pione
This update has been such a nice surprise. I hope to read more of it soon. Interesting to see that six months has past since the last time they saw each other. I wonder how things will go from here.
This update has been such a nice surprise. I hope to read more of it soon. Interesting to see that six months has past since the last time they saw each other. I wonder how things will go from here.
11/23/2014 c13 Pione
Wow. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story because this is really good. The narration is unusual but very interesting. Really looking forward to reading the next chapters.
Wow. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story because this is really good. The narration is unusual but very interesting. Really looking forward to reading the next chapters.
11/9/2014 c13 Imika
I have loved this story ever since the beginning that you had posted it, and I'm really glad that you haven't stopped. :3
I liked this chapter, too :D
- Imika
I have loved this story ever since the beginning that you had posted it, and I'm really glad that you haven't stopped. :3
I liked this chapter, too :D
- Imika
9/9/2013 c11 2Usuicross
I have been following this story for quite a while. :) Sure, the updates are late, but I still like it. A lot.
Thanks for writing this.
Imika
2UsuicrossI have been following this story for quite a while. :) Sure, the updates are late, but I still like it. A lot.
Thanks for writing this.
Imika
9/8/2013 c11 primeproper
I like this fucked up story and I don't knos why
I like this fucked up story and I don't knos why