for The Secret Goldfish8/22/2009 c1 
8Jessiy
Wow! I feel speechless, good job I only type for a review :). I don't know what to say, I'm still figuring this out. I think it is awesome and so interesting. Well written to. 10/10 Jessiy :) x
8JessiyWow! I feel speechless, good job I only type for a review :). I don't know what to say, I'm still figuring this out. I think it is awesome and so interesting. Well written to. 10/10 Jessiy :) x
8/20/2009 c1 kelto
Extremely disturbing. I loved it :D but separate it into smaller paragraphs please lol.
Extremely disturbing. I loved it :D but separate it into smaller paragraphs please lol.
8/20/2009 c1 48The Reverse Edge Blade
What a strange story...yet nice in its own way. The main character wasn't exactly a nice guy, making me wonder who I was going to sympathise with. In the end I decided on every animal he had killed. I really felt sorry for them.
Keep writing!
The Reverse Edge Blade
48The Reverse Edge BladeWhat a strange story...yet nice in its own way. The main character wasn't exactly a nice guy, making me wonder who I was going to sympathise with. In the end I decided on every animal he had killed. I really felt sorry for them.
Keep writing!
The Reverse Edge Blade
8/20/2009 c1 1Ida Dallas
Ha, wow.
Creepy/disturbing.
Good job, though you make want to look to breaking up the mega-paragraph.
1Ida DallasHa, wow.
Creepy/disturbing.
Good job, though you make want to look to breaking up the mega-paragraph.