for FirstFall10/27/2009 c11 
2Memory Chase
I really love this story line... I read every chapter in one sitting! Although it was a little confusing at times, I still got the general idea! I'm still trying to understand somethings, but I'm sure the story will work itself out! Anyway good job! I will be waiting for the next chapter!
2Memory ChaseI really love this story line... I read every chapter in one sitting! Although it was a little confusing at times, I still got the general idea! I'm still trying to understand somethings, but I'm sure the story will work itself out! Anyway good job! I will be waiting for the next chapter!
8/21/2009 c1 33BoReD tO dEaTh
It is a great story. and I will be waiting for the next chapters. advice to get more people interested in it. seperate you long paragraph. sometimes when people see that they dont want to read it all and it is very easy to lose your spot while reading something like that. it has a great story line. you should explain more of who your character Adam is. i mean you can drag the information out and spread it out, but it is good to know who everyone is.
33BoReD tO dEaThIt is a great story. and I will be waiting for the next chapters. advice to get more people interested in it. seperate you long paragraph. sometimes when people see that they dont want to read it all and it is very easy to lose your spot while reading something like that. it has a great story line. you should explain more of who your character Adam is. i mean you can drag the information out and spread it out, but it is good to know who everyone is.