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11/8/2009 c3 1igot4
Wait where is the rest of the story? Want more update update:)
11/8/2009 c2 igot4
Loving it so far.
8/27/2009 c2 Bazooka Joy
I just love the way Eloise describes Guy. Nice litle scene you created between the two of them here. A side to him that no one else has seen and she caught it.
8/27/2009 c1 Bazooka Joy
First off, I like your vocabulary. And your humor. That Krystal Burgers had me laughing out loud. Seriously. (I think you mean total coincidENCE** btw)

By the way, I haven't seen Sixteen Candles or Pretty In Pink so ya lost me there. Nice beginning though.
8/24/2009 c3 5Silencia LaRuse
This is really well written! I can't wait for more :)
8/23/2009 c3 Mo
Gotcha!

I don't like it when people swear either. i usually only swear by accident or when i am really really surpised. But that's still on accident.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Mo~
8/23/2009 c2 Mo
oh boy.

Things are getting interesting :)

~Mo~
8/23/2009 c1 Mo
She sure is a hellava lot smart!

~Mo~
8/23/2009 c2 3not-so-fair-maiden
I like it! Keep going!
8/23/2009 c2 10Koki Enwai
Hey, this is pretty good so far. I'm really liking it. :)

Can't wait for more.

- KE
8/22/2009 c1 2ixxemoxxxx
I like this a lot, but I would put a little more feeling into the writting. It kinda it like a biography about characters. Even in humor you should get a laughing vibe and a romantic vibe since this is in the romance area.

I think you should continue this story. It's got real good potential. If you want some help feel free to ask me.

Have fun, ;)

Carrie.

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