for My Roommate's Shoes7/30/2012 c29 
1Mariposa-12
Oh no! Something's gonna go really wrong. I really hope she tells Matt the reasons why she's doing that because if not, she's gonna lose him! Oh gosh! Now i can't wait to read the next one!
1Mariposa-12Oh no! Something's gonna go really wrong. I really hope she tells Matt the reasons why she's doing that because if not, she's gonna lose him! Oh gosh! Now i can't wait to read the next one!
7/30/2012 c29 Guest
MATT! WOO HOOO! Poor boy being dragged into all of these things...
MATT! WOO HOOO! Poor boy being dragged into all of these things...
7/23/2012 c28 6deadkitty1
The dialogue during the fight was good. To make it better maybe a few 'How's and some 'What?'s might solve some pauses for the character to absorb what the other just revealed. It was a pretty heated argument though. I was waiting for girl power to win out in the end but the two characters seem forever involve in being enemies. I'm sure it's not their fault. It's circumstances surrounding them that happened to get them to this point. Plus karma.
I was actually getting to like Lucas but I still wanted her to be with Matt. So I say a silent victory point for Matt since Lucas is exactly who I thought he was! Fun but trouble. But I do like the dialogue you do between Bella & Lucas and Bella & Matt. I like the awkwardness in both of their conversations!
6deadkitty1The dialogue during the fight was good. To make it better maybe a few 'How's and some 'What?'s might solve some pauses for the character to absorb what the other just revealed. It was a pretty heated argument though. I was waiting for girl power to win out in the end but the two characters seem forever involve in being enemies. I'm sure it's not their fault. It's circumstances surrounding them that happened to get them to this point. Plus karma.
I was actually getting to like Lucas but I still wanted her to be with Matt. So I say a silent victory point for Matt since Lucas is exactly who I thought he was! Fun but trouble. But I do like the dialogue you do between Bella & Lucas and Bella & Matt. I like the awkwardness in both of their conversations!
7/23/2012 c28 1Amy90
Yes! Hopefully, as soon she's over Lucas, she'll tell Matt the whole story - and hopefully she'll have realized by then that Matt is WAY better than Lucas.
1Amy90Yes! Hopefully, as soon she's over Lucas, she'll tell Matt the whole story - and hopefully she'll have realized by then that Matt is WAY better than Lucas.
7/23/2012 c28 elza17
omg i read all 28 chaps in less than 24 hours. Anyway i Love this story i was surprised when i found out lucus a really hot guy was doing that to belle... shocking! lol please i need MORE!
omg i read all 28 chaps in less than 24 hours. Anyway i Love this story i was surprised when i found out lucus a really hot guy was doing that to belle... shocking! lol please i need MORE!
7/23/2012 c28 MrsTomlinson69
I always had a feeling Lucas was actually a dick. I think she would be good with Matt. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope its up soon. :))
I always had a feeling Lucas was actually a dick. I think she would be good with Matt. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope its up soon. :))
7/22/2012 c28 Guest
Aaaahhh so much turmoil. I think you did the verbal fight really well :) Looking forward to see how things pan out, dont actually know what's going to happen.
Aaaahhh so much turmoil. I think you did the verbal fight really well :) Looking forward to see how things pan out, dont actually know what's going to happen.
7/22/2012 c28 Guest
I KNEW HE WAS AN ASS. I just wasn't sure how.
And that was written wonderfully, you could feel the tension and the angst in the fight. Quite well done
Sequels are always interesting!
I KNEW HE WAS AN ASS. I just wasn't sure how.
And that was written wonderfully, you could feel the tension and the angst in the fight. Quite well done
Sequels are always interesting!
7/22/2012 c28 Guest
I just found this and spend about an hour reading all the chapters, you're an amazing writer. The story is written so well, hardly any mistakes. Its SO GOOD! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
I just found this and spend about an hour reading all the chapters, you're an amazing writer. The story is written so well, hardly any mistakes. Its SO GOOD! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
7/22/2012 c28 3xXLonelyBeeXx
Hurry update! What is she gonna do? will she call matt and run to his arms? Please don't take to long!
3xXLonelyBeeXxHurry update! What is she gonna do? will she call matt and run to his arms? Please don't take to long!
7/22/2012 c28 Guest
i never really like lucas anyway, thought he was a bit sly/ an ass
i never really like lucas anyway, thought he was a bit sly/ an ass
7/22/2012 c28 1noriepie
Can't wait for next chapter! I'm sooo glad that's over, as in, the truth about Lucas was finally exposed to our heroine and it was about time! Jess..well, she's growing on me, mostly because nOw just realizing she's not so bad and she actually makes Liz grow a pair! Liz was able to stand up for herself! At least for a bit before she realized Lucas wasn't worth a shit...but yeah, she's grown up a bit which makes me say Matt-oh Maaaatttt come now.
1noriepieCan't wait for next chapter! I'm sooo glad that's over, as in, the truth about Lucas was finally exposed to our heroine and it was about time! Jess..well, she's growing on me, mostly because nOw just realizing she's not so bad and she actually makes Liz grow a pair! Liz was able to stand up for herself! At least for a bit before she realized Lucas wasn't worth a shit...but yeah, she's grown up a bit which makes me say Matt-oh Maaaatttt come now.
7/22/2012 c28 1sailorsweetart
o.o
Well, that was intense, to say the least. Who would've known Lucas was that horrible! I, for one, certainly didn't. But that just made this story all the more interesting, I suppose!
Great job with the chapter, as usual! You are just so good at writing this sort of thing!
Looking foreward to more, and looking foreward to how it all ends up :)
1sailorsweetarto.o
Well, that was intense, to say the least. Who would've known Lucas was that horrible! I, for one, certainly didn't. But that just made this story all the more interesting, I suppose!
Great job with the chapter, as usual! You are just so good at writing this sort of thing!
Looking foreward to more, and looking foreward to how it all ends up :)
7/22/2012 c28 7AMessofPickles
Oh boy oh boy oh boy XD
This was one crazy chapter, but it was an AMAZING chapter. Seriously, I know exactly what you mean about verbal fights, but you did a fantastic job here. I really like how you wrote it all, and I'm glad we finally uncovered everything about the bet. For a while there I was warming up to Luke (at the beginning of the chapter) but then after what Jess said...you're right he's moronic, arrogant and all of the above.
Now I'm back to rooting for Matt! There is a chance that he's not gay. Right? RIGHT? :P
Anyways, nice job, and I'd love to see how everything plays out from here. I hope Jess and Bella go back to being friends, because I really do think they need each other...
Update soon!
7AMessofPicklesOh boy oh boy oh boy XD
This was one crazy chapter, but it was an AMAZING chapter. Seriously, I know exactly what you mean about verbal fights, but you did a fantastic job here. I really like how you wrote it all, and I'm glad we finally uncovered everything about the bet. For a while there I was warming up to Luke (at the beginning of the chapter) but then after what Jess said...you're right he's moronic, arrogant and all of the above.
Now I'm back to rooting for Matt! There is a chance that he's not gay. Right? RIGHT? :P
Anyways, nice job, and I'd love to see how everything plays out from here. I hope Jess and Bella go back to being friends, because I really do think they need each other...
Update soon!