5/6/2012 c24 7AMessofPickles
HOLY CRUD!
Well...first of all this review is very late. I apologize my family's internet connection is completely down so that's been annoying.
But man! I hope Jess is alright! Gosh, I wonder what happened.
Oh and the development between Bella and Lucas is interesting. I think Bella is slowly redeeming herself since she feels guilty about both Matthew and Anna. So I think there's some hope for her to correct the problem ;)
Anyways, I hope she patches things up with Jess too! That would be good...oh and I want to know about the BET! XD What is it about exactly?
Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter :D
HOLY CRUD!
Well...first of all this review is very late. I apologize my family's internet connection is completely down so that's been annoying.
But man! I hope Jess is alright! Gosh, I wonder what happened.
Oh and the development between Bella and Lucas is interesting. I think Bella is slowly redeeming herself since she feels guilty about both Matthew and Anna. So I think there's some hope for her to correct the problem ;)
Anyways, I hope she patches things up with Jess too! That would be good...oh and I want to know about the BET! XD What is it about exactly?
Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter :D
5/6/2012 c24 lacey
That was good write more
That was good write more
4/30/2012 c24 6deadkitty1
O_o Talk about drama! Wow! Miss Isabella has a lot on her plate now.
And I see what you're doing~! Instead of trying to make Lucas into the bad guy, Isabella is gonna be the one that might end up breaking his heart. Right? Haha~! It does seem like he genuinely likes her and it seems like an excuse for her go to back to Matthew if she finds out that Lucas is a backstabber too like Jessica.
How did Isabella prevent herself from pouncing on that hot piece of bod? Hehehe~
O_o Talk about drama! Wow! Miss Isabella has a lot on her plate now.
And I see what you're doing~! Instead of trying to make Lucas into the bad guy, Isabella is gonna be the one that might end up breaking his heart. Right? Haha~! It does seem like he genuinely likes her and it seems like an excuse for her go to back to Matthew if she finds out that Lucas is a backstabber too like Jessica.
How did Isabella prevent herself from pouncing on that hot piece of bod? Hehehe~
4/30/2012 c24 mylittleprincess
bella go back to Matthew.update please
bella go back to Matthew.update please
4/29/2012 c24 1Amy90
OMG. This is pure drama! And for some reason I'm liking Matthew better and better and Lucas less and less. I'm kind of glad nothing's happened between Bella and Lucas and I really think she should start seeing what's right in front of her... Hope you'll update soon, can't wait to read more!
OMG. This is pure drama! And for some reason I'm liking Matthew better and better and Lucas less and less. I'm kind of glad nothing's happened between Bella and Lucas and I really think she should start seeing what's right in front of her... Hope you'll update soon, can't wait to read more!
4/29/2012 c16 Amy90
Well, yeah, now it's official that Jessica is a bitch. Although she isn't as bad as Nat is. She even seemed to like Bella a bit - even if she's just using her to win a bet. Anyway, I hope this won't lead Bella to going against her newly found principles - else she'd be no better than Nat and Jess. (But maybe happier... :D)
Well, yeah, now it's official that Jessica is a bitch. Although she isn't as bad as Nat is. She even seemed to like Bella a bit - even if she's just using her to win a bet. Anyway, I hope this won't lead Bella to going against her newly found principles - else she'd be no better than Nat and Jess. (But maybe happier... :D)
4/29/2012 c24 nicole7579
what is SO great about Lucas that Izzy pushes all warning signs out of her head? ugh she frustrates me! and she is going to let the guy that took care of her and was nice to her get away...
Poor Jessica I hope everything is okay. I bet Lucas is upset by her accident (or I hope so) which proves that they're not as over as he says
what is SO great about Lucas that Izzy pushes all warning signs out of her head? ugh she frustrates me! and she is going to let the guy that took care of her and was nice to her get away...
Poor Jessica I hope everything is okay. I bet Lucas is upset by her accident (or I hope so) which proves that they're not as over as he says
4/29/2012 c24 1sailorsweetart
Lucas is sweet :) But I still feel like he's hiding something... either that, or I'm just an idiot xD
Now that Jessica's actually in the hospital, I feel kinda bad. I hope I didn't uhm, jinx anything.
Lucas is sweet :) But I still feel like he's hiding something... either that, or I'm just an idiot xD
Now that Jessica's actually in the hospital, I feel kinda bad. I hope I didn't uhm, jinx anything.
4/29/2012 c7 1Amy90
Well, this is certainly complicated: Jessica might or might not be a bitch, fact is that Lucas is HER boyfriend and ergo he's not available. But maybe that's the reason Bella fell for him... He's off limits, so she can savely fall for him and let herself a little bit dream. I'm curious as to where this will be leading to... :)
Well, this is certainly complicated: Jessica might or might not be a bitch, fact is that Lucas is HER boyfriend and ergo he's not available. But maybe that's the reason Bella fell for him... He's off limits, so she can savely fall for him and let herself a little bit dream. I'm curious as to where this will be leading to... :)
4/29/2012 c3 Amy90
Hey, I've only read the first two chapters yet but I wanted to leave a review before I read on (I'm definitley going to read the next chapters) - I find the start really interesting. A guy with small feet - that's uncommon, really *lol* and these strange circumstances that Lucas came out of Jessica's room looking dishelved but Jessica obviously doesn't know he was there? That's kind of creepy... :D I so NEED to know what's going on there!
Hey, I've only read the first two chapters yet but I wanted to leave a review before I read on (I'm definitley going to read the next chapters) - I find the start really interesting. A guy with small feet - that's uncommon, really *lol* and these strange circumstances that Lucas came out of Jessica's room looking dishelved but Jessica obviously doesn't know he was there? That's kind of creepy... :D I so NEED to know what's going on there!
4/29/2012 c24 1J-NM23
OMG!
Okay, this is twisted like completely twisted. Poor Jess, why did she put Bella as her emergency contact? Oh gosh, definitely the story has changed in a way that now I'm more interested. You know? Before I was like "I want Bella to be with Lucas right now" but now... I don't know something seems...off between those two. And Matthew is such a peculiar character, I thought I've figured him out but now I'm not so sure anymore.
I want him to be with Bella :3
I'm sorry I didn't reviewed before but college is hell... So much work to do!
See you next chapter :)
OMG!
Okay, this is twisted like completely twisted. Poor Jess, why did she put Bella as her emergency contact? Oh gosh, definitely the story has changed in a way that now I'm more interested. You know? Before I was like "I want Bella to be with Lucas right now" but now... I don't know something seems...off between those two. And Matthew is such a peculiar character, I thought I've figured him out but now I'm not so sure anymore.
I want him to be with Bella :3
I'm sorry I didn't reviewed before but college is hell... So much work to do!
See you next chapter :)
4/29/2012 c24 1noriepie
well...now this is a new development. I feel like there are some more things that bella are oblivious about. but that may not be her fault.
I think she should be with Matt
well...now this is a new development. I feel like there are some more things that bella are oblivious about. but that may not be her fault.
I think she should be with Matt
4/29/2012 c24 3Lovely Dreams
Oh my gawd... There's something bout jess that's making me very suspicious... Hope she gets better though!
Oh my gawd... There's something bout jess that's making me very suspicious... Hope she gets better though!
4/27/2012 c23 6deadkitty1
Oh, you are very good! So skilled slapping down that triangle like a freaking ninja! My emotions were undergoing a roller coaster ride I didn't know I was in-store for!
I have a love & hate relationship with triangles: 1 boy & 2 guys but at the same time I'm secretly in love with it. You wrote everyone's reactions so well, I'm squeeing with glee!
Oh, Izzy... Izzy. I'm frustrated with her but I like how she's human. A flawed heroine. And Lucas is such a hot bad boy. I kinda want to hate him but probably like Izzy, he's too irresistible. XD
I'll just wait here. With cringing anticipation for the next chapter. hehe~
Oh, you are very good! So skilled slapping down that triangle like a freaking ninja! My emotions were undergoing a roller coaster ride I didn't know I was in-store for!
I have a love & hate relationship with triangles: 1 boy & 2 guys but at the same time I'm secretly in love with it. You wrote everyone's reactions so well, I'm squeeing with glee!
Oh, Izzy... Izzy. I'm frustrated with her but I like how she's human. A flawed heroine. And Lucas is such a hot bad boy. I kinda want to hate him but probably like Izzy, he's too irresistible. XD
I'll just wait here. With cringing anticipation for the next chapter. hehe~
4/23/2012 c23 myliitleprincess
no bella go with Matthew. update fast please.
no bella go with Matthew. update fast please.