for My Roommate's Shoes1/11/2012 c16 
1xlittleredtearx
Jessicas a bitch, I want to punch her. I hope Bella and Lucas get together, update soon! i love his story. Also I did not notice that you mentioned Twilight more then once.
1xlittleredtearxJessicas a bitch, I want to punch her. I hope Bella and Lucas get together, update soon! i love his story. Also I did not notice that you mentioned Twilight more then once.
1/4/2012 c6 5breatheyou7
Oh I definitely like this story so far! I love the bathroom scene.
and I was surprised to read you're from Finland! I live in Sweden myself. hah
5breatheyou7Oh I definitely like this story so far! I love the bathroom scene.
and I was surprised to read you're from Finland! I live in Sweden myself. hah
1/4/2012 c1 breatheyou7
oh this was really funny! I loved it. And the idea is great, the beginning really intrigued me - describing the orange converse and all that - made me want to read more.
oh this was really funny! I loved it. And the idea is great, the beginning really intrigued me - describing the orange converse and all that - made me want to read more.
12/26/2011 c15 6Lilang
I like your story, it's well written, and I'm definitely hooked :)
Somehow, I hope she doesn't end up with Lucas, he does seem sincere, but... I don't know, I like Jess, I like their starting friendship... Does he deserve that the girls ruin this for him?
I'll definitely be following the next chapters!
6LilangI like your story, it's well written, and I'm definitely hooked :)
Somehow, I hope she doesn't end up with Lucas, he does seem sincere, but... I don't know, I like Jess, I like their starting friendship... Does he deserve that the girls ruin this for him?
I'll definitely be following the next chapters!
12/4/2011 c15 1Susan Holt
Poor Bella... denial much?
I keep agreeing with Lucas in the last few chapters... she definitely deserves better! LOL And this whole hot/cold signals from him towards her are really getting on my nerves. Gee, dude! Grow a pair and deal with the situation! You want Bella, end thigns with Jessica and go for it. Otherwise, you just deserve a good ol' beating from someone big... huge... really. Guys like that are a shame to the rest of their sex. And Bella... yes, wanting someone you can't have sucks titties, but honeybunch, once a cheater/asshole, always a cheater/asshole. Karma is a bitch indeed and I'd love to see Luc-Luc getting exactly what he deserves, if he won't get his act straight.
Maybe Matt is not entirely a bad idea... hell, I even started liking him a bit more now that I saw what Lucas is going into. Plus, he's hot... yes, I'm shallow! :)
Bella is the only person who can hurt herself. Not Lucas, not Matt, not anyone else. She treats herself like trash, then that's exactly what she will attract from Lucas and every Lucas she meets in her life. Simple as that.
Good chapter! :)
1Susan HoltPoor Bella... denial much?
I keep agreeing with Lucas in the last few chapters... she definitely deserves better! LOL And this whole hot/cold signals from him towards her are really getting on my nerves. Gee, dude! Grow a pair and deal with the situation! You want Bella, end thigns with Jessica and go for it. Otherwise, you just deserve a good ol' beating from someone big... huge... really. Guys like that are a shame to the rest of their sex. And Bella... yes, wanting someone you can't have sucks titties, but honeybunch, once a cheater/asshole, always a cheater/asshole. Karma is a bitch indeed and I'd love to see Luc-Luc getting exactly what he deserves, if he won't get his act straight.
Maybe Matt is not entirely a bad idea... hell, I even started liking him a bit more now that I saw what Lucas is going into. Plus, he's hot... yes, I'm shallow! :)
Bella is the only person who can hurt herself. Not Lucas, not Matt, not anyone else. She treats herself like trash, then that's exactly what she will attract from Lucas and every Lucas she meets in her life. Simple as that.
Good chapter! :)
12/2/2011 c15 3StaNdUPtomE
So, this is going to end bad, he's not going to leave her, and he's going to pull our dear Isabella along.. :(
3StaNdUPtomESo, this is going to end bad, he's not going to leave her, and he's going to pull our dear Isabella along.. :(
12/1/2011 c15 mylittleprincess
next chapter please.
next chapter please.
11/30/2011 c15 6deadkitty1
Dejavu? I feel like I just hit the end of the story for some reason since the main character decides to reminisce from the beginning... I'd feel really lousy if this is the ending.
I like the progression of the story through each chapter where I can see how Isabella changes and falls in love with Lucas. Also I like the triangle set-up of wanting a taken man. With Anna here, I hope she'll keep Isabella grounded and help her re-think her actions. I'm not entirely oppose to Isabella & Lucas's relationship, but maybe it's time that Lucas gets jealous or something? During most of their encounters, Lucas seems to be the one that initiates the kiss/flirt and Isabella gets caught into it. I'd like to see where she actually refuses his advances. I think it'd be interesting.
It's nice how you voice the thoughts and arguments in her head. It makes me relate more to the character and puts into perspective to why she acts like this or that in certain situations. Though from what I can analyze through the changes in Isabella, she's becoming less nice and quiet and more mean and impulsive. I don't know if this spells trouble in the nearby future but it could. As for Jessica, I just feel really bad for her. Not only because Isabella's making out with her boyfriend but she's also using Jess to be close to her boyfriend. It's all a mess! Which is probably why this story is addicting. Hope you'd continue soon!
6deadkitty1Dejavu? I feel like I just hit the end of the story for some reason since the main character decides to reminisce from the beginning... I'd feel really lousy if this is the ending.
I like the progression of the story through each chapter where I can see how Isabella changes and falls in love with Lucas. Also I like the triangle set-up of wanting a taken man. With Anna here, I hope she'll keep Isabella grounded and help her re-think her actions. I'm not entirely oppose to Isabella & Lucas's relationship, but maybe it's time that Lucas gets jealous or something? During most of their encounters, Lucas seems to be the one that initiates the kiss/flirt and Isabella gets caught into it. I'd like to see where she actually refuses his advances. I think it'd be interesting.
It's nice how you voice the thoughts and arguments in her head. It makes me relate more to the character and puts into perspective to why she acts like this or that in certain situations. Though from what I can analyze through the changes in Isabella, she's becoming less nice and quiet and more mean and impulsive. I don't know if this spells trouble in the nearby future but it could. As for Jessica, I just feel really bad for her. Not only because Isabella's making out with her boyfriend but she's also using Jess to be close to her boyfriend. It's all a mess! Which is probably why this story is addicting. Hope you'd continue soon!
11/30/2011 c15 1econverse19
Woah! That was AWESOME! You're an amazing writer! I was just looking for a short story to read but I was instantly hooked! Keep writing!
1econverse19Woah! That was AWESOME! You're an amazing writer! I was just looking for a short story to read but I was instantly hooked! Keep writing!
11/30/2011 c15 1Mariposa-12
I gotta say i like anna already. I hope she's around more often so she can somehow keep bella grounded but i doubt that will happen. I feel sorry for bella and that "he's different..." speech pissed me off as much as anna haha. This story makes me anxious! I keep dreading how much worse it will get!
Thanks for the update!
; )
1Mariposa-12I gotta say i like anna already. I hope she's around more often so she can somehow keep bella grounded but i doubt that will happen. I feel sorry for bella and that "he's different..." speech pissed me off as much as anna haha. This story makes me anxious! I keep dreading how much worse it will get!
Thanks for the update!
; )
11/30/2011 c15 raindropsslowly
Bella is definitely changing and it's sad that she's in denial. I sort of feel bad for a girl who changes for a guy. Especially when she starts dressing and acting different and even starts drinking all because she wants to be around him. But hopefully Bella will turn around and be herself, even if that does mean giving up Lucas.
Bella is definitely changing and it's sad that she's in denial. I sort of feel bad for a girl who changes for a guy. Especially when she starts dressing and acting different and even starts drinking all because she wants to be around him. But hopefully Bella will turn around and be herself, even if that does mean giving up Lucas.
11/30/2011 c15 1noriepie
Lol you know what was funny? Before i started reading this chapter I saw the summary and I was thinking about the shoes as well. Then you ended the chapter with the shoes! So now I have to tell you...the summary implied that Lucas has small feet. You know what they say about guys with small feet...
...big ears :p.
I kind of know to want someone you can't have. It sucks but it's not end of the world, so I have hope for her. I don't know why but I kind of like Matthew for her.
1noriepieLol you know what was funny? Before i started reading this chapter I saw the summary and I was thinking about the shoes as well. Then you ended the chapter with the shoes! So now I have to tell you...the summary implied that Lucas has small feet. You know what they say about guys with small feet...
...big ears :p.
I kind of know to want someone you can't have. It sucks but it's not end of the world, so I have hope for her. I don't know why but I kind of like Matthew for her.