2/23/2011 c6 Georgia
:D :D :D These past three chapters were AWESOME! Sorry I haven't reviewed for a little while, I'm currently in my final year of high school and things are getting oh so hectic :(
Super duper jealous that you're in Vienna, I always feel like just giving up on my education and jumping on a plane, but alas! I must march on. Love the tension between Lucas and Bella. Bella is so adorable but I love how she has gutsy moments, like in this chapter, talking to Luca. Can't wait for the next chapter!
:D :D :D These past three chapters were AWESOME! Sorry I haven't reviewed for a little while, I'm currently in my final year of high school and things are getting oh so hectic :(
Super duper jealous that you're in Vienna, I always feel like just giving up on my education and jumping on a plane, but alas! I must march on. Love the tension between Lucas and Bella. Bella is so adorable but I love how she has gutsy moments, like in this chapter, talking to Luca. Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/23/2011 c6 MelikaCalva
Loved the chapter...I find your writing interesting and it draws me it. can't wait to see where the story line is going.
Loved the chapter...I find your writing interesting and it draws me it. can't wait to see where the story line is going.
2/12/2011 c5 2Leanna de Weisdorn
I don't like twilight, but that is something everyone has his/her one opinion on. The story reminds me of another one , with the mother and the party( I read to much and can't keep track of them). But I like the story =)
I don't like twilight, but that is something everyone has his/her one opinion on. The story reminds me of another one , with the mother and the party( I read to much and can't keep track of them). But I like the story =)
2/11/2011 c5 2shanaenae123
love this story so far! :D update soon! and a question for the shoes: um... is lucas's shoes supposed to be small as in small for a guys but still big? or small as in literally small like girls shoe size small. okay i don't think i'm making sense but hope you understand any way :D update soon!
love this story so far! :D update soon! and a question for the shoes: um... is lucas's shoes supposed to be small as in small for a guys but still big? or small as in literally small like girls shoe size small. okay i don't think i'm making sense but hope you understand any way :D update soon!
2/10/2011 c5 1Mariposa-12
I just love Isabella's personality haha. For being a "geek" she's very outspoken when it comes to expressing her anger (don't know if i'm being stereotypical but i thought geeks were more reserved and quiet..maybe i'm wrong), i love the cursing haha for someone so "shy", i love many more things, like i said, her attitude is awesome haha.
Thanks for the quick update! Looking forward to the next one already!
;)
I just love Isabella's personality haha. For being a "geek" she's very outspoken when it comes to expressing her anger (don't know if i'm being stereotypical but i thought geeks were more reserved and quiet..maybe i'm wrong), i love the cursing haha for someone so "shy", i love many more things, like i said, her attitude is awesome haha.
Thanks for the quick update! Looking forward to the next one already!
;)
2/10/2011 c5 3StaNdUPtomE
Awesome story
can't wait for more... and of course he is the roomates first 'real' bf
Awesome story
can't wait for more... and of course he is the roomates first 'real' bf
2/10/2011 c5 Ana
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.
I get scared easily so I've never read Twilight (since it has vampires). :P
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.
I get scared easily so I've never read Twilight (since it has vampires). :P
2/10/2011 c5 Asrialth
Hey Laura!
I have followed this story right from the beginning, and I really loved the first three chapters. You were right when you said that we had probably forgotten about it, but trust me, it all came back to me when I read the new chapter. You got me hooked again immediately.
I like this story so much because the plot (so far) isn't too cliche. Normally, it is about a girl that falls in love with some unreachable guy and she doesn't understand her feelings. But what I like in your story is that Bella actually knows that what she is feeling is a crush for Lucas, but that is just all she makes of it. That is a whole new thing. Also, if you would write 'written by Cecelia Ahern' or 'story by Marianne Keyes' I would actually believe it :P You have the writing style that would fit on the shelves in bookstores among all the popular modern chicklits-with-something-more.
All in all, I am interested to read more. If the plot stays as interesting as it is now, your story micht be promoted to my 'favorites' list :P
Xx
Eline ak Asrialth
Hey Laura!
I have followed this story right from the beginning, and I really loved the first three chapters. You were right when you said that we had probably forgotten about it, but trust me, it all came back to me when I read the new chapter. You got me hooked again immediately.
I like this story so much because the plot (so far) isn't too cliche. Normally, it is about a girl that falls in love with some unreachable guy and she doesn't understand her feelings. But what I like in your story is that Bella actually knows that what she is feeling is a crush for Lucas, but that is just all she makes of it. That is a whole new thing. Also, if you would write 'written by Cecelia Ahern' or 'story by Marianne Keyes' I would actually believe it :P You have the writing style that would fit on the shelves in bookstores among all the popular modern chicklits-with-something-more.
All in all, I am interested to read more. If the plot stays as interesting as it is now, your story micht be promoted to my 'favorites' list :P
Xx
Eline ak Asrialth
2/4/2011 c4 Ana
I think Lucas and me have some sort of connection because I thought the exact same things when my roomate forced me to watch Twilight.
I won't go on about why I strongly disliked that movie...but I did enjoy this chapter. I can't wait to read more. (:
I think Lucas and me have some sort of connection because I thought the exact same things when my roomate forced me to watch Twilight.
I won't go on about why I strongly disliked that movie...but I did enjoy this chapter. I can't wait to read more. (: