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2/23/2011 c6 ebs12
cute, the toothpaste thing kind of reminded me of 'bring it on'
2/23/2011 c6 Georgia
:D :D :D These past three chapters were AWESOME! Sorry I haven't reviewed for a little while, I'm currently in my final year of high school and things are getting oh so hectic :(

Super duper jealous that you're in Vienna, I always feel like just giving up on my education and jumping on a plane, but alas! I must march on. Love the tension between Lucas and Bella. Bella is so adorable but I love how she has gutsy moments, like in this chapter, talking to Luca. Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/23/2011 c1 5mirandaafk
LOVE IT. I'm suscribing.
2/23/2011 c6 MelikaCalva
Loved the chapter...I find your writing interesting and it draws me it. can't wait to see where the story line is going.
2/13/2011 c5 2mmjasamjaudia4eva
Wow! I really really like this fic!
2/12/2011 c5 2Leanna de Weisdorn
I don't like twilight, but that is something everyone has his/her one opinion on. The story reminds me of another one , with the mother and the party( I read to much and can't keep track of them). But I like the story =)
2/11/2011 c5 2shanaenae123
love this story so far! :D update soon! and a question for the shoes: um... is lucas's shoes supposed to be small as in small for a guys but still big? or small as in literally small like girls shoe size small. okay i don't think i'm making sense but hope you understand any way :D update soon!
2/10/2011 c5 1Mariposa-12
I just love Isabella's personality haha. For being a "geek" she's very outspoken when it comes to expressing her anger (don't know if i'm being stereotypical but i thought geeks were more reserved and quiet..maybe i'm wrong), i love the cursing haha for someone so "shy", i love many more things, like i said, her attitude is awesome haha.

Thanks for the quick update! Looking forward to the next one already!

;)
2/10/2011 c5 3StaNdUPtomE
Awesome story

can't wait for more... and of course he is the roomates first 'real' bf
2/10/2011 c5 Ana
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.

I get scared easily so I've never read Twilight (since it has vampires). :P
2/10/2011 c5 ebs12
the guy that she's being set up with at the party is going to be Lucas, isn't it?
2/10/2011 c5 Asrialth
Hey Laura!

I have followed this story right from the beginning, and I really loved the first three chapters. You were right when you said that we had probably forgotten about it, but trust me, it all came back to me when I read the new chapter. You got me hooked again immediately.

I like this story so much because the plot (so far) isn't too cliche. Normally, it is about a girl that falls in love with some unreachable guy and she doesn't understand her feelings. But what I like in your story is that Bella actually knows that what she is feeling is a crush for Lucas, but that is just all she makes of it. That is a whole new thing. Also, if you would write 'written by Cecelia Ahern' or 'story by Marianne Keyes' I would actually believe it :P You have the writing style that would fit on the shelves in bookstores among all the popular modern chicklits-with-something-more.

All in all, I am interested to read more. If the plot stays as interesting as it is now, your story micht be promoted to my 'favorites' list :P

Xx

Eline ak Asrialth
2/10/2011 c5 fatimm
Wonderful story! update soon ..
2/5/2011 c4 Mayuka
pretty good update! wish they came more frequently. :) Keep em coming!
2/4/2011 c4 Ana
I think Lucas and me have some sort of connection because I thought the exact same things when my roomate forced me to watch Twilight.

I won't go on about why I strongly disliked that movie...but I did enjoy this chapter. I can't wait to read more. (:
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