for My Roommate's Shoes2/7/2010 c3 
1ConfusedDolly
amazing... loved it, am interested to find out how this plays out xP
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1ConfusedDollyamazing... loved it, am interested to find out how this plays out xP
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2/3/2010 c3 12Her Acoustic Heart
AHaha, I feel like something like this has happened to someone I know. Which makes this even MORE hilarious! How does this not have more review?
12Her Acoustic HeartAHaha, I feel like something like this has happened to someone I know. Which makes this even MORE hilarious! How does this not have more review?
1/22/2010 c2 itbackfired.hitmeontheforehead
DON"T TORTURE THE READER!
bring updates up!
please (insert i'm on my knees begging.)
please? (crying candies.)
(puppy eyes..) (fainted..)
DON"T TORTURE THE READER!
bring updates up!
please (insert i'm on my knees begging.)
please? (crying candies.)
(puppy eyes..) (fainted..)
1/19/2010 c2 Asrialth
Hey!
This looks like an interesting story! I will keep reading, because I like the way you write!
keep it up!
Hey!
This looks like an interesting story! I will keep reading, because I like the way you write!
keep it up!
1/18/2010 c2 1ConfusedDolly
im glad you decided to continue this!
darn i was kinda hopeing bella and lucas would end up together... oh well.. interesting xD
update soon :)
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1ConfusedDollyim glad you decided to continue this!
darn i was kinda hopeing bella and lucas would end up together... oh well.. interesting xD
update soon :)
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1/18/2010 c2 quill588
haha this is great its like " Bella's series of unfortunate events"...wonder how this'll play out I thought it'd be Bella and Lucas...but its Jess and Lucas...hm.
haha this is great its like " Bella's series of unfortunate events"...wonder how this'll play out I thought it'd be Bella and Lucas...but its Jess and Lucas...hm.
1/18/2010 c2 3Medusa's.Protege
Ooh! She's gonna hang with jessie and her BOYFRIEND! Poor little Bella! I could never be able to face the guy who saw me topless!
3Medusa's.ProtegeOoh! She's gonna hang with jessie and her BOYFRIEND! Poor little Bella! I could never be able to face the guy who saw me topless!
1/14/2010 c1 Georgia
Hahaha it's me again! I had a brainwave and decided to check your profile thingo for more stories. Your probably thinking DUH Georgia! But in my defense I don't have an account and... nah that's a crappy excuse sorry sorry sorry. I really like this story and would most definitely read it if you decided to continue it :D My last slightly immature thought was, "You know what they say!" Except this time it wouldn't be, big hands big feet...it would be the opposite. Heehee. In summary; Totally worth continuing! (in my point of view) X)
Hahaha it's me again! I had a brainwave and decided to check your profile thingo for more stories. Your probably thinking DUH Georgia! But in my defense I don't have an account and... nah that's a crappy excuse sorry sorry sorry. I really like this story and would most definitely read it if you decided to continue it :D My last slightly immature thought was, "You know what they say!" Except this time it wouldn't be, big hands big feet...it would be the opposite. Heehee. In summary; Totally worth continuing! (in my point of view) X)
8/22/2009 c1 southernsinger21
I really like this, I think it has potential. I do hope that you make it more than just a one-shot especially because good quirky stories are so hard to come by on here.
Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to reading more.
I really like this, I think it has potential. I do hope that you make it more than just a one-shot especially because good quirky stories are so hard to come by on here.
Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to reading more.
8/22/2009 c1 17irenethewriter
I also thought this was really well written especially the shirtless scene, lol. You captured the embarrassment so well! Also I like the humor in it. Nicely done. I think this is really good as a one-shot, but of course you could decide to write more.
17irenethewriterI also thought this was really well written especially the shirtless scene, lol. You captured the embarrassment so well! Also I like the humor in it. Nicely done. I think this is really good as a one-shot, but of course you could decide to write more.
8/22/2009 c1 3blonski
Very well written, I liked it a lot! At this point I think it is a good one-shot. The reason for that is because if you were to continue, a name like "My roommate's Shoes" would have to be incorporated into the entire story. Don't get me wrong, it's not like I don't think you can do that, its just a difficult situation. Secondly, Lucas seems sexy, yes, and oh so suave. But, if he's coming out of her roommate's room in the middle of the night looking like he just had sex, is he really the type thats going to interest Bella? (Thats me expecting that Lucas is the main male character of course)
At any rate, job well done :)
Aeryn
3blonskiVery well written, I liked it a lot! At this point I think it is a good one-shot. The reason for that is because if you were to continue, a name like "My roommate's Shoes" would have to be incorporated into the entire story. Don't get me wrong, it's not like I don't think you can do that, its just a difficult situation. Secondly, Lucas seems sexy, yes, and oh so suave. But, if he's coming out of her roommate's room in the middle of the night looking like he just had sex, is he really the type thats going to interest Bella? (Thats me expecting that Lucas is the main male character of course)
At any rate, job well done :)
Aeryn