for My Roommate's Shoes3/9/2013 c16 Kaliya14
JESSICA WHAT THE FUCK YOU FUCKING BITCH WHAT BET MAN I SHOULD RIP YOUR FUCKING HAIR FROM YOUR LITTLE UGLY HEAD BITCH woo i feel so muchbetter saying this i love tge story so far by the way
JESSICA WHAT THE FUCK YOU FUCKING BITCH WHAT BET MAN I SHOULD RIP YOUR FUCKING HAIR FROM YOUR LITTLE UGLY HEAD BITCH woo i feel so muchbetter saying this i love tge story so far by the way
1/3/2013 c34 
1Edna-Mode413
So glad you're starting a sequel because the ending did not feel like an ending at all. Hopefully you'll actually complete the sequel and not ditch it midway like most authors who write sequels. I see a lot of potential for the sequel so good luck to you on that. Also you're a splendid author so I'm sure you'll do Matt's and Bella's story justice.
On a side note, since the main characters name is Isabella and her friends call her Bella, I couldn't help but cringe each time and be like "why? Why did she she have to be named Bella?" because I kept thinking of Bella from twilight. Haha. Anyways this was a good read, I just blasted through it because it was that spellbinding and I kept hoping that Lucas wouldn't be in on the bet because that would just make Bella really pitiful and pathetic, but alas he was and my prediction was true, but you wrapped it up really nicely so it didn't really matter.
1Edna-Mode413So glad you're starting a sequel because the ending did not feel like an ending at all. Hopefully you'll actually complete the sequel and not ditch it midway like most authors who write sequels. I see a lot of potential for the sequel so good luck to you on that. Also you're a splendid author so I'm sure you'll do Matt's and Bella's story justice.
On a side note, since the main characters name is Isabella and her friends call her Bella, I couldn't help but cringe each time and be like "why? Why did she she have to be named Bella?" because I kept thinking of Bella from twilight. Haha. Anyways this was a good read, I just blasted through it because it was that spellbinding and I kept hoping that Lucas wouldn't be in on the bet because that would just make Bella really pitiful and pathetic, but alas he was and my prediction was true, but you wrapped it up really nicely so it didn't really matter.
11/28/2012 c34 6deadkitty1
The ending was disappointing because of Matthew agreeing to be her friend. I wanted to literally bang my head on the wall. He is too GOOD for her unfortunately and I think the ending would have been just deserved if both of them separated. It also doesn't seem like Bella learned her lesson. She is selfish in the beginning for wanting a relationship with Lucas when he was with Jessica and also keeping Matthew strung along, even if it is unconsciously done. In the end, she still looks out for herself by selfishly agreeing to Matthew's proposal of friendship. I really thought she might redeem herself by refusing it but she didn't. Bella's a fun character. Imperfect yet I sort of lost respect for her during that incident. It's just my opinion though.
The story overall was a fun doze of drama to read. It just wasn't wrapped up as cleanly as I thought. I didn't need a happy ending, I just wanted Bella to make up her mind and stop being so indecisive.
6deadkitty1The ending was disappointing because of Matthew agreeing to be her friend. I wanted to literally bang my head on the wall. He is too GOOD for her unfortunately and I think the ending would have been just deserved if both of them separated. It also doesn't seem like Bella learned her lesson. She is selfish in the beginning for wanting a relationship with Lucas when he was with Jessica and also keeping Matthew strung along, even if it is unconsciously done. In the end, she still looks out for herself by selfishly agreeing to Matthew's proposal of friendship. I really thought she might redeem herself by refusing it but she didn't. Bella's a fun character. Imperfect yet I sort of lost respect for her during that incident. It's just my opinion though.
The story overall was a fun doze of drama to read. It just wasn't wrapped up as cleanly as I thought. I didn't need a happy ending, I just wanted Bella to make up her mind and stop being so indecisive.
11/26/2012 c34 Peatregimz
this story should not have ended in the first had tha suspense and the engagement it created with the reader was just outta this world.
this story should not have ended in the first had tha suspense and the engagement it created with the reader was just outta this world.
11/6/2012 c34 1DuchessYappingDog
Oh my god I was going to kill you for ending it like that before I read that you are writing a sequel. But I do love the last part about shoe size and male appendage size correlation. I guess Lucus had a real small weewee then. Good thing she never tapped that and was horrified by the lack of size...
1DuchessYappingDogOh my god I was going to kill you for ending it like that before I read that you are writing a sequel. But I do love the last part about shoe size and male appendage size correlation. I guess Lucus had a real small weewee then. Good thing she never tapped that and was horrified by the lack of size...
11/6/2012 c19 DuchessYappingDog
Matt is so much better than Lucus, in my opinion. He's more mature and stuff. The stuff she feels for Lucus is only lust. With Matt, she can be friends with him and trust him.
Matt is so much better than Lucus, in my opinion. He's more mature and stuff. The stuff she feels for Lucus is only lust. With Matt, she can be friends with him and trust him.
11/5/2012 c2 DuchessYappingDog
Whoops hahaha. The things that happen when you try to brave it every now and then.
Whoops hahaha. The things that happen when you try to brave it every now and then.
11/5/2012 c1 DuchessYappingDog
Hmmm I have very big feet for someone my height so I don't think I could deal with a guy with smaller hands and feet than me. I would feel like the man. :(
Hmmm I have very big feet for someone my height so I don't think I could deal with a guy with smaller hands and feet than me. I would feel like the man. :(
11/4/2012 c1 7poetintraining576
Oh, my god.
This story was brilliant. I'm really mad that Bella and Matt didn't get together at the end, but if that means you'll write a sequel, then it's totally worth it.
I am favoriting this story, and you as an author. It was that good, and if you write anything else, I definitely want to read it. Take it as a compliment that I spent all afternoon reading this and neglecting my homework... and even watching The Big Bang Theory. :)
Please, please, please write more romance!
7poetintraining576Oh, my god.
This story was brilliant. I'm really mad that Bella and Matt didn't get together at the end, but if that means you'll write a sequel, then it's totally worth it.
I am favoriting this story, and you as an author. It was that good, and if you write anything else, I definitely want to read it. Take it as a compliment that I spent all afternoon reading this and neglecting my homework... and even watching The Big Bang Theory. :)
Please, please, please write more romance!
11/2/2012 c34 Guest
Very disappointed in how you decided to end this story. It took you more than three years to complete this and now you expect people to follow you over to a sequel? Sorry, I won't be wasting another three years.
Very disappointed in how you decided to end this story. It took you more than three years to complete this and now you expect people to follow you over to a sequel? Sorry, I won't be wasting another three years.
11/2/2012 c34 RememberingSunday1997
I can't wait for the sequel! You're very talented and I enjoyed every word that I've read. I was kind of surprised with the ending. I hope Bella will eventually end up with the right person. (:
I can't wait for the sequel! You're very talented and I enjoyed every word that I've read. I was kind of surprised with the ending. I hope Bella will eventually end up with the right person. (: