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12/18/2009 c1 21Sercus Kaynine
I like the tension in this piece. It gave it a lot of emotion for such a short work.

I also liked the way you used your own prompt because it was creative.

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8/22/2009 c1 Disabled Account sdf
Great first chapter! You set the scene nicely for horrors to come, and tease the reader, making them want to read more!

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