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9/1/2009 c1 67Samurai-Soldier
Looks very nice, maybe a tad-bit short, but hey, it's not like i've heard it. I imagine this one being like an Evanesence song, if you like her. Excellent portayl of feeling, and great, smooth rhyming, Peace
8/27/2009 c1 7A.J Scarlet
Ooh that sounds like a song with an edge! Cool. Well I think it was simple which is cool.
8/25/2009 c1 1lookingforsomething1994
This is really good :D I like how it sounds.
8/24/2009 c1 23Amaury
I would really like to here this put to music. Nice job. It's a bit repetitious, but I suppose that adds to the song.
8/24/2009 c1 26wordsofjade
Really good!
8/24/2009 c1 23fatbird33
overall a good song. i liked this line the best. "But I’m aware now, yeah I’m alert" it seemed strong. two things:

"Were over now, were done, were through" in that line it should be we're.

and

"When all of the time you weren’t true" i think you could make this line with less words so it's more of a statement and more powerful.

~fatbird:)

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