for Caught in the moment11/7/2010 c3 Amanda
I think it is very good, please update :)
I think it is very good, please update :)
10/3/2010 c3 Lazy Dragon
I don't think that was boring at all. a good little sippit of info at the end keeps me wondering. you better update and soon!
~~BlackDragon of F1R3
(I was too lazy to sign in)
I don't think that was boring at all. a good little sippit of info at the end keeps me wondering. you better update and soon!
~~BlackDragon of F1R3
(I was too lazy to sign in)
9/30/2010 c3 
3bumblee bee
OMG you updated! Wait who is Hayley? and WOW they slept together quickly! hhahahh Loved it!
Always B.
3bumblee beeOMG you updated! Wait who is Hayley? and WOW they slept together quickly! hhahahh Loved it!
Always B.
9/3/2009 c2 3bumblee bee
aww gut i like Ethan! he is soo cute ! and hey how was the guy she was with just then? i like how innocent brooke is its refreshing!
update soon
love b.
3bumblee beeaww gut i like Ethan! he is soo cute ! and hey how was the guy she was with just then? i like how innocent brooke is its refreshing!
update soon
love b.
9/1/2009 c2 Capriccio
Somehow i like ow you wirte stories, they don't drag on about your characters in a 'dear diary' kind of way.
Got engaged in every paragraph of the way. Your characters are introduced quite early in the story so that keeps me entertained !
Especailly love the way you start and end your chapters.
The conversations between ethan and Brooke was hilarious, and sweet too.
who'd of thought the beatles would be mentioned in the same chapter as jonas brothers.
btw, i totally agree, jonas brothers are gay :)
hope you keep writing!
Somehow i like ow you wirte stories, they don't drag on about your characters in a 'dear diary' kind of way.
Got engaged in every paragraph of the way. Your characters are introduced quite early in the story so that keeps me entertained !
Especailly love the way you start and end your chapters.
The conversations between ethan and Brooke was hilarious, and sweet too.
who'd of thought the beatles would be mentioned in the same chapter as jonas brothers.
btw, i totally agree, jonas brothers are gay :)
hope you keep writing!
9/1/2009 c1 Capriccio
firstly i love your titles that you make.
definately caught my attention.
I love your characters, the mix up of all sorts of genres of cliche in this one story.
i especially was engaged with the last part of this chapter! Got me to pass my moments, these days i get bored and nearly all stories are deleted, so it's a Big relief to see a story like this in progress !
although i still hope hero will be finished off as much as this one
firstly i love your titles that you make.
definately caught my attention.
I love your characters, the mix up of all sorts of genres of cliche in this one story.
i especially was engaged with the last part of this chapter! Got me to pass my moments, these days i get bored and nearly all stories are deleted, so it's a Big relief to see a story like this in progress !
although i still hope hero will be finished off as much as this one
9/1/2009 c2 didn't feel like logging in
hm...interesting...I'm likin this one...keep it goin
hm...interesting...I'm likin this one...keep it goin
8/26/2009 c1 cutie
haha
i like it!
cant wait for more missy=)
haha
i like it!
cant wait for more missy=)
8/25/2009 c1 1jazzyinuluvsesshyxxoo
Ahahaha...lol, now that was hilarious, hmm, I certainly like Ethan, his charcter is just unordinarily brilliant, great story!
Jazzy xoxo /'.'\
1jazzyinuluvsesshyxxooAhahaha...lol, now that was hilarious, hmm, I certainly like Ethan, his charcter is just unordinarily brilliant, great story!
Jazzy xoxo /'.'\