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9/17/2009 c1 1lookingforsomething1994
awesome metaphor. It sounds really good :D
9/1/2009 c1 67Samurai-Soldier
Clever metaphor, and I like how you used it. Again, seems short, and again, probably just me. The rhyming was interesting and the whole of the structure seems pretty solid. Well writtin, Peace
8/31/2009 c1 26wordsofjade
Pretty cool song. Different concept but I defintely like it. :)
8/27/2009 c1 7A.J Scarlet
Hm, simple songs lately huh? I guess it okay, not your best work I'll confess but it's nice.
8/25/2009 c1 23fatbird33
good metaphor with the car tires. i don't know if this was intentional or not, but you spelled car tires wrong...

also you used the wrong your on more than one occasion.

~fatbird:)
8/25/2009 c1 25KelaBelle
Lovely Lyrics XOXO

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