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8/27/2009 c1 109ADSpencer
I really liked this. It was sizzling all the way through. My favorite line was "everything you." And I think you did such an excellent job of breaking the stanzas and of using italics for proper emphasis (I could practically hear a voice reading the poem in my head). Nicely done!
8/27/2009 c1 11J. D. Bennett
I like this a lot...I agree about the last stanza though. Something's missing. Maybe just a few more syllables? Reword it in a different way? I don't know, I just feel like it kind of just drops off. Anyway, good work!
8/27/2009 c1 27BaxterB
I don't know what it is exactly that I like about this, but I think it's great. The only thing I can really complain about is the one swear there, but it really does work well there. Just a personal opinion there. Really really good.
8/27/2009 c1 4Kurohime no Miko
WOW this was realy good, I could just feel the passion of the speaker
8/27/2009 c1 lymli
that's a hot poem, I like the descriptions, are passionate.

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