8/27/2009 c1 109ADSpencer
I really liked this. It was sizzling all the way through. My favorite line was "everything you." And I think you did such an excellent job of breaking the stanzas and of using italics for proper emphasis (I could practically hear a voice reading the poem in my head). Nicely done!

8/27/2009 c1 27BaxterB
I don't know what it is exactly that I like about this, but I think it's great. The only thing I can really complain about is the one swear there, but it really does work well there. Just a personal opinion there. Really really good.

8/27/2009 c1 lymli
that's a hot poem, I like the descriptions, are passionate.