
9/2/2009 c1
8LostInMe
"We can be them / But who are they, besides / A deformed / Dismembered version / Of everyone else?" A powerful ending to a powerful poem.

"We can be them / But who are they, besides / A deformed / Dismembered version / Of everyone else?" A powerful ending to a powerful poem.
8/28/2009 c1 luv me like no other
i like the theme and the concepts. the way you describe it in short lines is really interesting and refreshing.
i like the theme and the concepts. the way you describe it in short lines is really interesting and refreshing.
8/27/2009 c1
7A.M. Ashel
*sigh* Reviewing poetry is so much harder than reviewing other things because I can never come up with any helpful advice for improvement, but I like this poem and wanted to tell you as much.
It's insightful. The language you use is just complex enough to camouflage the true depths of the insight until the last couple lines, which I am especially fond of.
Sorry my review can't be more helpful.

*sigh* Reviewing poetry is so much harder than reviewing other things because I can never come up with any helpful advice for improvement, but I like this poem and wanted to tell you as much.
It's insightful. The language you use is just complex enough to camouflage the true depths of the insight until the last couple lines, which I am especially fond of.
Sorry my review can't be more helpful.