10/12/2009 c4 11fabiolalabelle
this is a good staory ..i like it. Keep writting

8/30/2009 c1 abbiexcx1996x
i do hav an account, see NAME, but i couldn't be bothered to log in cause the internet is really bad. anyway, i like the plot and how you set it up. i hope you continue this story. your grammar and punctuation is basically perfect. great beginning.

abbie