for Falling Apart11/19/2009 c1 yzarC
you write great stories... NINJAS STAR COOKIES! (sorry had to say that)XD
you write great stories... NINJAS STAR COOKIES! (sorry had to say that)XD
11/14/2009 c4 anber
AMAZING STORY SO FAR! please please please X10 post more chapters ! X
AMAZING STORY SO FAR! please please please X10 post more chapters ! X
9/7/2009 c4 
11Caoimhe Rose
okay, that was amazing! the raw emotion, it was so, so, so, raw!
yeah i am sad/mad at you, because you killed Logan. all i have to say is that usually its the good people who die. so really we can't be mad at you.
i can't wait to see what happens next, and how Nicole's relationships with Nick and Chad go. please update soon!
11Caoimhe Roseokay, that was amazing! the raw emotion, it was so, so, so, raw!
yeah i am sad/mad at you, because you killed Logan. all i have to say is that usually its the good people who die. so really we can't be mad at you.
i can't wait to see what happens next, and how Nicole's relationships with Nick and Chad go. please update soon!
8/31/2009 c4 2GraceElaganceandBeauty
Why did you kill Logan I actually started crying? Couldn't have been the Dad instead?
2GraceElaganceandBeautyWhy did you kill Logan I actually started crying? Couldn't have been the Dad instead?
8/30/2009 c4 darkgurl92
OMG...why did logan die...that's not fair.
it should've been the dad...i liked logan...
update soon..
OMG...why did logan die...that's not fair.
it should've been the dad...i liked logan...
update soon..
8/30/2009 c4 9Manga Girl Lover
oh... my... goodness gracious. No! Logan Can't be dead! he's too awesome! ack! how could this happen? at least the dad didn't beat him which is what I had originally thought. But still... no. I love the story so far. a LOT so I can't wait for you to update again! :D
9Manga Girl Loveroh... my... goodness gracious. No! Logan Can't be dead! he's too awesome! ack! how could this happen? at least the dad didn't beat him which is what I had originally thought. But still... no. I love the story so far. a LOT so I can't wait for you to update again! :D
8/29/2009 c4 poohketchix
OMG. that's all i can say. :))
UPDAATE!
OMG. that's all i can say. :))
UPDAATE!
8/29/2009 c4 Hazelnut Romance
omg. why did logan have to die? that's so unfair. i was crying when i read it. hope to see another update soon. and would we see more of why nick and logan were so angry at each other all the time?
omg. why did logan have to die? that's so unfair. i was crying when i read it. hope to see another update soon. and would we see more of why nick and logan were so angry at each other all the time?
8/29/2009 c2 cosmopolitan
so... now that everythign is cleared up im giving this story a fair shot :D lol.
anyway, i like how nick appears jealous of the relationship btwn logan and nicole, clearly feeling liek the third wheel (but then even when he does try to rectify that he fails miserably, like with the whole movie fiasco) but he deserves it as, truly, he is quite the ass...
chad... ah, chad, one of my least fav names, but he is pretty damn swt...
enjoying this, off to read more.
so... now that everythign is cleared up im giving this story a fair shot :D lol.
anyway, i like how nick appears jealous of the relationship btwn logan and nicole, clearly feeling liek the third wheel (but then even when he does try to rectify that he fails miserably, like with the whole movie fiasco) but he deserves it as, truly, he is quite the ass...
chad... ah, chad, one of my least fav names, but he is pretty damn swt...
enjoying this, off to read more.
8/29/2009 c1 cosmopolitan
*sigh* im such a huge fan of your pieces but as much as i'm trying to force myself to read this one i just cant after having read the original (from the reunion and in the perspective of logan's fiancee... i was really hoping she and logan would end up together not he and the ex...)
ah well, looking forward to what you post in your other stories, otherwise
*sigh* im such a huge fan of your pieces but as much as i'm trying to force myself to read this one i just cant after having read the original (from the reunion and in the perspective of logan's fiancee... i was really hoping she and logan would end up together not he and the ex...)
ah well, looking forward to what you post in your other stories, otherwise