12/5/2009 c5 11Caoimhe Rose
talk about drama! quite a twist of events, noa finding out that sam is her uncle, tai is her REAL father, and that she isn't human. finding this all out after a concussion. though, what is tai going to think when he finds out that sam told her? this next chapter is going to be interesting! :D
really well written, i can't wait to see what else you write for this story. i am already looking forward to the next chapter! especially since this one had quite a cliff-hanger. i really want to find out what noa's reaction is going to be.
talk about drama! quite a twist of events, noa finding out that sam is her uncle, tai is her REAL father, and that she isn't human. finding this all out after a concussion. though, what is tai going to think when he finds out that sam told her? this next chapter is going to be interesting! :D
really well written, i can't wait to see what else you write for this story. i am already looking forward to the next chapter! especially since this one had quite a cliff-hanger. i really want to find out what noa's reaction is going to be.
10/8/2009 c4 Caoimhe Rose
go ahead with the next chapter! please continue. i must say that this chapter was a bit longer then the rest.
go ahead with the next chapter! please continue. i must say that this chapter was a bit longer then the rest.