for Beauty and the Bear2/10/2010 c2 
2asianinvasion0530
Well the narrator certainly makes things interesting! Haha I like her.
But anyways, great start and good luck juggling all three stories...that's pretty ambitious! Well to me at least, 'cause I'm like the laziest writer ever.
2asianinvasion0530Well the narrator certainly makes things interesting! Haha I like her.
But anyways, great start and good luck juggling all three stories...that's pretty ambitious! Well to me at least, 'cause I'm like the laziest writer ever.
2/9/2010 c2 Anonymous
I love this story. The writing style and narrative is definitely a different style from your other works but its definitely interesting. I like reading the story from the point of view from someone who seems to be a bystander in the characters' world rather than an omniscient narrator that seems removed from it all.
Anyways, I think I remember reading the prologue a while back and really enjoying it so I think it's great you've decided to continue this. I look forward to your first installment of Carson City. I'm sure it will be just as AMAZING as all your other work :)
Great start to your story.
I love this story. The writing style and narrative is definitely a different style from your other works but its definitely interesting. I like reading the story from the point of view from someone who seems to be a bystander in the characters' world rather than an omniscient narrator that seems removed from it all.
Anyways, I think I remember reading the prologue a while back and really enjoying it so I think it's great you've decided to continue this. I look forward to your first installment of Carson City. I'm sure it will be just as AMAZING as all your other work :)
Great start to your story.
2/9/2010 c2 kfjhbvasiuhvauvba
I like Belle and Robert's characters so far; it seems like something out of a movie. And I'm glad you're done putting this story on hiatus/hold, it's getting real good and it's only on the first chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter of Beauty and the Bear, Good Girls Go Bad, Masterpiece one-shot and Carson City; although, I don't exactly remember what Carson City was about.
Oh wow, you've got a lot on your plate.
And...WO! Saints won! Rockin' :)
I like Belle and Robert's characters so far; it seems like something out of a movie. And I'm glad you're done putting this story on hiatus/hold, it's getting real good and it's only on the first chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter of Beauty and the Bear, Good Girls Go Bad, Masterpiece one-shot and Carson City; although, I don't exactly remember what Carson City was about.
Oh wow, you've got a lot on your plate.
And...WO! Saints won! Rockin' :)
2/9/2010 c2 3ShadowBrilliance
I like this story, Belle is cool, I like her. =). Hmm, this is a remake of Beauty and the Beast? Everytime I watch that movie, I cry ='(. Well, anyways, update soon! Wait, is Carson City and NEW story, or a Masterson ad-on? Either way =). I have a story coming up, I'm putting it up on Valentine's Day (I loathe that day...but I want to put up stories for certain days of the year. My main character's name is Carson. Hmm)
I like that name, but, anyways. I went back and re-read the last chapter of Realize, and, the Carson City explict. Hmm...blue eyes? I wonder, and kinda hope...lol, ah well, we'll all just see, huh? Can't wait.
Oh, great, I'm rambling again. Hmm...I don't think that your character's come in yet, well, from this. Ah well. I love how you narrirate this story, like, like a movie, kinda. I love it, makes me laugh from the tense moments. =)
Update soon.
-I Heart ?-
3ShadowBrillianceI like this story, Belle is cool, I like her. =). Hmm, this is a remake of Beauty and the Beast? Everytime I watch that movie, I cry ='(. Well, anyways, update soon! Wait, is Carson City and NEW story, or a Masterson ad-on? Either way =). I have a story coming up, I'm putting it up on Valentine's Day (I loathe that day...but I want to put up stories for certain days of the year. My main character's name is Carson. Hmm)
I like that name, but, anyways. I went back and re-read the last chapter of Realize, and, the Carson City explict. Hmm...blue eyes? I wonder, and kinda hope...lol, ah well, we'll all just see, huh? Can't wait.
Oh, great, I'm rambling again. Hmm...I don't think that your character's come in yet, well, from this. Ah well. I love how you narrirate this story, like, like a movie, kinda. I love it, makes me laugh from the tense moments. =)
Update soon.
-I Heart ?-
2/9/2010 c1 ShadowBrilliance
I've been curious about this story for a little while, but I was so caught up in the Mastersons, but, I guess since you've updated, and 'Good Girls Go Bad', isn't updated the same time, I want to read it. Well, I wanted to read it around August, but, yeah. =). I shall read on! (P.S: Beauty and the Beast is my favourite old Disney Princess Movie. My favourite is the Princess and the Froh =)
One Month. Two Weeks. Zero Days. Nine Hours. 13 minutes. (It's February Ninth, 6:28 pm.)
I've been curious about this story for a little while, but I was so caught up in the Mastersons, but, I guess since you've updated, and 'Good Girls Go Bad', isn't updated the same time, I want to read it. Well, I wanted to read it around August, but, yeah. =). I shall read on! (P.S: Beauty and the Beast is my favourite old Disney Princess Movie. My favourite is the Princess and the Froh =)
One Month. Two Weeks. Zero Days. Nine Hours. 13 minutes. (It's February Ninth, 6:28 pm.)
2/9/2010 c2 1Midnight113
This is great, I love the third person commentary you've got going on here. It's very amusing. I also love the Beauty and the Beast inspiration, it's my favorite out of all of them. Can't wait for more!
1Midnight113This is great, I love the third person commentary you've got going on here. It's very amusing. I also love the Beauty and the Beast inspiration, it's my favorite out of all of them. Can't wait for more!
2/9/2010 c2 1Jinxed Rogue
I love literary references in stories. There's been lots of references to 'The Catcher in the Rye' since JD Salinger died, and I remember it from h.s. I hated it but I have to admit it's the grandfather of all teen angst.
I like that you've taken a very different approach to the narrator. I haven't seen someone use the first person as the storyteller in quite a while, it works well because you've got a great narrative voice.
Wow, the Masterson overload sounds so awesome.
1Jinxed RogueI love literary references in stories. There's been lots of references to 'The Catcher in the Rye' since JD Salinger died, and I remember it from h.s. I hated it but I have to admit it's the grandfather of all teen angst.
I like that you've taken a very different approach to the narrator. I haven't seen someone use the first person as the storyteller in quite a while, it works well because you've got a great narrative voice.
Wow, the Masterson overload sounds so awesome.
2/9/2010 c2 9Incandescently Chelsea
Oh...I think I'm gonna like this one! And I love that the setting is in Alabama, super close to where I am, and you got all of the lingo correctly (Y'all, mama, etc) =D
Great job! Can't wait for another update!
~Chelsea Elizabeth
9Incandescently ChelseaOh...I think I'm gonna like this one! And I love that the setting is in Alabama, super close to where I am, and you got all of the lingo correctly (Y'all, mama, etc) =D
Great job! Can't wait for another update!
~Chelsea Elizabeth
2/9/2010 c2 4notjustink
This is really good. It's hard to rewrite fairy tales and stay original, but you nailed it so far. AIE! Next chapter. :)
4notjustinkThis is really good. It's hard to rewrite fairy tales and stay original, but you nailed it so far. AIE! Next chapter. :)
2/9/2010 c2 sappyromancelvr
Thats disgustingly adorable. haha
Update soon! Belle's got a bit of an icy temper eh?
Thats disgustingly adorable. haha
Update soon! Belle's got a bit of an icy temper eh?