for Beauty and the Bear8/30/2009 c1 colourmyworld
Yes. I do think your crazy.
But it sounds awesome.
I'v never seen any of Disney princess movies.
I havnt. I know. Its weird.
Love love love you.
But you already know that.
Yes. I do think your crazy.
But it sounds awesome.
I'v never seen any of Disney princess movies.
I havnt. I know. Its weird.
Love love love you.
But you already know that.
8/30/2009 c1 A Merry Savant
Man, so many self-interruptions, contradictions, or in other words, disclaimers to be of the trite.
A tad cliche in itself. If this story's so unique, draw us in with it's awesome storyline already. Gabbing about how great you are is always worth less than reading the great thing itself.
It's like that situ where the two hour intro to Lincoln's Gettysburg Address isn't remembered, as stated by the speaker himself, but Lincoln's Address is remembered for ... until now. And it was less than half an hour. Quality counts
Man, so many self-interruptions, contradictions, or in other words, disclaimers to be of the trite.
A tad cliche in itself. If this story's so unique, draw us in with it's awesome storyline already. Gabbing about how great you are is always worth less than reading the great thing itself.
It's like that situ where the two hour intro to Lincoln's Gettysburg Address isn't remembered, as stated by the speaker himself, but Lincoln's Address is remembered for ... until now. And it was less than half an hour. Quality counts
8/30/2009 c1 nevershoutrachel
hah, this took me a short time to read.
i'm happy i'm the first to comment on it.
i was suprised to see you had wrote a new story.
but i can't wait to see what this is about.
hah, this took me a short time to read.
i'm happy i'm the first to comment on it.
i was suprised to see you had wrote a new story.
but i can't wait to see what this is about.