
10/5/2019 c1 Guest
Adorable!
Adorable!
8/22/2015 c1 blazedveggies556
I liked this story. :) You really gave the character Eric a great depth in personality. You actually gave everything a great depth. Good job! :D
I liked this story. :) You really gave the character Eric a great depth in personality. You actually gave everything a great depth. Good job! :D
6/30/2014 c1 Kris
U ar xo cool,i mean hw the deuce do you always get me to fall in love with even your shortest piece..lets hang out you know,an oh i'm kris-anita
U ar xo cool,i mean hw the deuce do you always get me to fall in love with even your shortest piece..lets hang out you know,an oh i'm kris-anita
12/29/2013 c1
29Ginbrat
I loved that last line. I was on the verge of crying and that last line, "YESSS!" he cried out happily. "Yes! Yes! Yes!" "Um, Eric?" Shannon's voice over the intercom. He stopped spinning and looked at her, surprised, and she was grinning at him. "You might want to turn off the mike now."

I loved that last line. I was on the verge of crying and that last line, "YESSS!" he cried out happily. "Yes! Yes! Yes!" "Um, Eric?" Shannon's voice over the intercom. He stopped spinning and looked at her, surprised, and she was grinning at him. "You might want to turn off the mike now."
2/24/2012 c1
105laura Decamara
I think your story was good..but I think you should have added more chapters to it...it sounds like something I would like to read

I think your story was good..but I think you should have added more chapters to it...it sounds like something I would like to read
12/5/2010 c1 larafrancesca
Adorable! *goofy grin*
Adorable! *goofy grin*