7/19/2011 c1 anonymo
Loved it, loved the idea and the end, you could definitely tweak it a bit to make it flow better by reading it out loud a few times but other than the choppy parts it's awesome! Great work and all the better that you enjoyed yourself while writing it :)

9/1/2009 c1 16Howle
This is pretty good. Although I'm not usually a fan of these kind of poems, I have to make an exception for yours. The metaphor for the voice being a little person was definitely amusing. And the ending put it together quite nicely. A job well done.