for Facing the Music1/14/2012 c9 
4Soren the Maniacal Dragon
Well, I don't know if this means much to you, but I wanted to thank you. I've been a Christian for a long time, but lately I've been having trouble with my own faith and such. I think this is him telling me what he's still there and he has a plan for me, as well as pointing out what I already knew but didn't feel like believing... So thank you.
Also, I thought I should let you know that the link for you blog isn't showing up. =)
4Soren the Maniacal DragonWell, I don't know if this means much to you, but I wanted to thank you. I've been a Christian for a long time, but lately I've been having trouble with my own faith and such. I think this is him telling me what he's still there and he has a plan for me, as well as pointing out what I already knew but didn't feel like believing... So thank you.
Also, I thought I should let you know that the link for you blog isn't showing up. =)
8/30/2010 c1 1Triangle
The main character comes out with some good humour, but I find there isn't really much character development. And I found myself wanting to skip the parts where she's talking to herself in her head, because it just annoyed me. I like the clumsiness, it actually makes me laugh, but I don't like the chemistry between her and Duncan. Apart from that, it's really good. ^_^
1TriangleThe main character comes out with some good humour, but I find there isn't really much character development. And I found myself wanting to skip the parts where she's talking to herself in her head, because it just annoyed me. I like the clumsiness, it actually makes me laugh, but I don't like the chemistry between her and Duncan. Apart from that, it's really good. ^_^
8/17/2010 c1 8Cort Jester
Well, it seems a little self absorbed in tone. It seems that misfortune humor is a big draw in the movies so that's a good thing. Clumsy is only funny so many times. Interesting view into the world of your character though. Perhaps edit with an eye to making everything a bit more subtle. that would give the piece a more literary feel. Good going and doing well into the much beloved future.
8Cort JesterWell, it seems a little self absorbed in tone. It seems that misfortune humor is a big draw in the movies so that's a good thing. Clumsy is only funny so many times. Interesting view into the world of your character though. Perhaps edit with an eye to making everything a bit more subtle. that would give the piece a more literary feel. Good going and doing well into the much beloved future.
9/10/2009 c3 6EmmaWoodhouse88
Oh My Gosh, that is just horribe.. Why does she stay? This seems like it will be a good story, can't wiat for the next chapter!
6EmmaWoodhouse88Oh My Gosh, that is just horribe.. Why does she stay? This seems like it will be a good story, can't wiat for the next chapter!
9/8/2009 c3 Kitty Otaku
Yay! I'm not the only one who doesn't use an outline!
I find it too time consuming, and I have little scenes and details play out in my head and I have to write them down.
Then I'll keep a sentence or two and change an entire scene. Heheheh.
Great job! I really like it!
Kitty
Yay! I'm not the only one who doesn't use an outline!
I find it too time consuming, and I have little scenes and details play out in my head and I have to write them down.
Then I'll keep a sentence or two and change an entire scene. Heheheh.
Great job! I really like it!
Kitty
9/6/2009 c2 13rollinby
hey again ... could you give a description of the characters please... im havin a lil bit of difficulty imaginin them
13rollinbyhey again ... could you give a description of the characters please... im havin a lil bit of difficulty imaginin them
9/6/2009 c1 rollinby
hey ! seems nice so far ... the line "He leaned forward, searching her eyes, as if to find out why she had taken that semester off." needs to be fixed ... it should be - searching my eyes, as if to find out why I had ... thts cus the story is written in first person
hey ! seems nice so far ... the line "He leaned forward, searching her eyes, as if to find out why she had taken that semester off." needs to be fixed ... it should be - searching my eyes, as if to find out why I had ... thts cus the story is written in first person
9/3/2009 c1 Niggysupporter
W freaking ow. Wow. That. Was. The. Best. Story. I've. Ever. Read. On. This. Site... EVER!
W freaking ow. Wow. That. Was. The. Best. Story. I've. Ever. Read. On. This. Site... EVER!