
9/8/2009 c1
6Jacalyn Hyde
Ah, yes you ARE too creepy stalker! Asking permission to do so or continue doing so seems odd and more creepy. Ugly please: : )

Ah, yes you ARE too creepy stalker! Asking permission to do so or continue doing so seems odd and more creepy. Ugly please: : )
9/6/2009 c1
612simpleplan13
I liked this. It was cute. The repetition worked well here. I liked the second stanza as well, the play on the normal phrase was really funny. The whole idea of asking to haunt someone is interesting. It's a nice funny little piece.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile).

I liked this. It was cute. The repetition worked well here. I liked the second stanza as well, the play on the normal phrase was really funny. The whole idea of asking to haunt someone is interesting. It's a nice funny little piece.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile).