
6/17/2010 c1
23angrylove888
See, this wasn't sappy, either. It was perfect. The formatting emphasized the structure of the poem and gave it life. You really are an amazing poet. Your style is very unique. I'm adding you to my favorites.

See, this wasn't sappy, either. It was perfect. The formatting emphasized the structure of the poem and gave it life. You really are an amazing poet. Your style is very unique. I'm adding you to my favorites.
12/13/2009 c1
38That For Which It Dreams
Ah, I really like this one- very on the edge :] I love all of your work, amazing really, and I'm encouraging you to keep writing :]

Ah, I really like this one- very on the edge :] I love all of your work, amazing really, and I'm encouraging you to keep writing :]
11/6/2009 c1
48x.Miss.Twiztid.x
I am all sorts of in love with this poem. It's eloquent, to the point, has amazing alliteration, and I love the style.
Plus, it tugs a few heartstrings, because I'm definitely feeling this way about someone. :3

I am all sorts of in love with this poem. It's eloquent, to the point, has amazing alliteration, and I love the style.
Plus, it tugs a few heartstrings, because I'm definitely feeling this way about someone. :3
9/9/2009 c1
4HighOnBrokenWings
Great poem.
As always :D
I loved it :)
Also, the formating was frigging awesome. I read this a while back, but didn't review for some reason or another. Your breaking up of words and phrases put emphasis in just the right places :D
Really good read :)
(I've worn the smile faces thin, huh?)

Great poem.
As always :D
I loved it :)
Also, the formating was frigging awesome. I read this a while back, but didn't review for some reason or another. Your breaking up of words and phrases put emphasis in just the right places :D
Really good read :)
(I've worn the smile faces thin, huh?)
9/7/2009 c1
16maple the wacky tree
wow. it's been a while. ^^
such a powerful piece. i loved every bit of it. but as usual, i find that the way you take the risk in your formatting is one of your strongest skills. i've always admired the way you know how to arrange and format certain words in your poem so that it has even more impact than before. it's almost like art in itself.

wow. it's been a while. ^^
such a powerful piece. i loved every bit of it. but as usual, i find that the way you take the risk in your formatting is one of your strongest skills. i've always admired the way you know how to arrange and format certain words in your poem so that it has even more impact than before. it's almost like art in itself.
9/6/2009 c1
166listen to what i've never said
I love this one :) It's your usual style of writing and your favorite crazy format. Just your usual Best :D

I love this one :) It's your usual style of writing and your favorite crazy format. Just your usual Best :D
9/6/2009 c1
54wayfaringstrangers
i love how you dare this person to do something different in each stanza. and the formatting just adds to the emotion.
wonderful job on this!

i love how you dare this person to do something different in each stanza. and the formatting just adds to the emotion.
wonderful job on this!
9/6/2009 c1
478speakeasy-love
I love the way this is set up. all the bolding and spacing, they way it chopes the poem up.
in each stanza it seems like you're addressing a fear.
i really like this poem!

I love the way this is set up. all the bolding and spacing, they way it chopes the poem up.
in each stanza it seems like you're addressing a fear.
i really like this poem!