9/6/2009 c1 7SoneAnna
Well now that ending was...WOW. I wasn't expecting that...maybe they broke up? But...wow. What a shocker. Good job on that.

At first I confused with the phone ringing...then fight? And then...I dunno, maybe its the way you described it, but the story was a little confusing in the middle.

Overall, I think this is a great little number. :)

~Sone, from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)