for Death9/13/2009 c1 jesse benderman
Instead of hiding in the covers and pillows. You can hide in my arms and I will never let you go. I will protect you to the best of my abilaties. (Especially from Zack B.)
Instead of hiding in the covers and pillows. You can hide in my arms and I will never let you go. I will protect you to the best of my abilaties. (Especially from Zack B.)
9/10/2009 c1 
1silent-anthem
this is kinda random isn't it? But you have created a character afraid of death coming to her which is ok. Her thought about one of her loved ones sending her into a shock is good but you could've put more of her fears and thoughts into this story. what else is your character afraid of?
silent-anthem
1silent-anthemthis is kinda random isn't it? But you have created a character afraid of death coming to her which is ok. Her thought about one of her loved ones sending her into a shock is good but you could've put more of her fears and thoughts into this story. what else is your character afraid of?
silent-anthem